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5/15/22, 7:12 PM
Really great beginning! I'll be looking forward to seeing what comes next!

5/16/22, 7:02 PM
@time.to.occur thanks so much!
5/16/22, 3:54 PM
Love the idea of going up behind someone and just fingering and fucking them - I mean I would probably add some rimming first, hehe. But yeah this casual sex world - especially with its fucked silly component - is super hot. Love how he is a power top, his ass is not the point its his cock and the ass of others. I am curious about something, you mention him 'pushing through the second hole' and such, what is he fucking towards? Also, so maybe its just me, but I didn't realize that the gods give the power and its not like genetic, not sure what I think about that. But yeah, lots of fun, lots of potential, lots of fun, fantastic sex to be had!

5/16/22, 6:04 PM
There's no "towards" per se—it's just a tighter section of a guy's ass, with more sweet spots inside! The sweet spots are also fantastical, of course, but I thought it was a fun addition to the world. With respect to the gods, note that this is just what _Talley_ thinks is supposed to happen. What's actually going to happen is... well, i'd say "another story," but it's this story, as it's continued in _Top Maker_! I'm glad you loved it so much. I will say, though, that the other three chapters of this story involve Talley going from top to switch. The tops involved are hot, but they're not the POV. So it's up to you whether to get it or not. @Heru Kane
5/16/22, 5:29 PM
I can always dig a good mpreg story! And there's something so damn hot about a top who knocks up an unsuspecting guy and intends to do it, especially if he takes care of him after. This was sexy.
5/16/22, 3:26 PM
I might be biased given that I helped you edit this thing, but: I love it! Really excellent work sketching out Talley’s character, his motivations, and (of course) delivering a scorching-hot sex scene. To say nothing of the world-building, which is *chef’s kiss*. Very nicely done!

5/16/22, 4:49 PM
I absolutely loved worldbuilding for this story. There’s basically something new in every single chapter! The amount of ruminating this went through before it started going to you was, hoo, a lot. But thank you, too, for your phenomenal editing. @Noam de Pluma
Anonymous
5/16/22, 4:34 PM
This was so good, I really hope we see more of DoubleCream, either a continuation of this or a different story. You are a talented writer!
5/16/22, 1:58 PM
Always thought this was a great story
5/16/22, 1:20 PM
LOVE the story!! Hope there is more coming!!!
Anonymous
5/16/22, 11:40 AM
Man I was so caught reading and it just ended...amazing theme incredible story, hope there's more to come!
5/16/22, 10:59 AM
Another amazing chapter! The physical and mental changes are taking hold, and I like how you show how the human mind justifies whatever is happening to it. Creepy stuff! :D
Anonymous
5/16/22, 10:12 AM
Nice idea but could have been more detailed on the changes happening and/or thought processes.