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Spiralthiago
5/12/22, 9:40 PM
very good story I loved the transformations the story is very hot 🤤🤤🔥🔥🔥
5/12/22, 7:31 PM
Welcome to the club of authors! The idea of your story is very nice, but please consider using Grammarly and a proofreader from the Discord to improve the language! Still, loved the idea!

5/12/22, 9:19 PM
@Transformheaven thank you, i will try to used it!
SlutForHypno
5/12/22, 3:15 AM
The Next Chapter will be the finale of this series. It had been very fun to write (and hopefully to read.) but I do not want to risk this series getting stale. Therefore it will end with the final trial of Kaa's favorite bois. Either way, this series has been hell fun so thanks for reading. Also, let me know what you guys think of the memory alteration aspect. I used this to experiment with a 3 part story I plan to write involving memory changed. I actually have to multi part series lined up based on some RPs i did with a guy (well at least started lol). One of which is a 3 parter involving Naga brothers hypnotizing a couple of anthros at a college frat party, who may or may not have been sold to them (there is a twist to it.) This is the story involving memory change. The other story involves a human prince being forced to marry the dragon king who conquered his kingdom...and resist falling in love... Needless to say. this story also involves copious amount so hypnosis I plan on doing both, but if you have a preference do let me know. Other than that tank you for reading the series and as always comments and critiques are always appreciated

5/12/22, 7:26 PM
@SlutForHypno looking forewords to the dragon story, well, to bad next part is the finale, I was going to suggest adding Kronk to the harem

SlutForHypno
5/12/22, 9:04 PM
@darkblade2814 Yea Sorry about that. Its getting tougher for me to find creative ways for Kaa to hypnotize people and I don't want to get burnt out. But I will very much keep Kronk in mind for future stories....We cant just ignore the worlds best Himbo. That said, I'm glad you've enjoyed this series. Im also glad to hear you're excited about the Dragon one. The prince isn't too excited for it, but a good fucking might just change that
5/12/22, 6:42 PM
Upping the ante perfectly. A perfect mix of sweet and spooky, as all the best fairy tales.
5/12/22, 6:25 PM
Another awesome chapter. Loving the fact that Xander is so shy about what he feels and how Janus is so dedicated in helping him out.
5/12/22, 4:51 PM
Really good story. Erotic but also somewhat sweet? Sincerely hope there will be a Chapter 2
5/12/22, 4:21 PM
Loved this and looking forward to reading the rest. Janus is so sweet!
5/12/22, 3:20 PM
Really enjoying this series. Love how we continue to hear from both mindsets! Genius level mindfuckery!
5/12/22, 4:12 AM
I like this series tremendously! Thanks for writing it! A few little grammar comments: Your prepositions (on, in, etc.) are confusing. Secondly, I know you are doing this in 3rd person, but sometimes its unclear as to whose perspective we are in with reading further in the paragraph.

5/12/22, 3:01 PM
@tankonpoint Thanks for your comment! Oh yeah, prepositions are a bane of me since English is not my native language and the "on/in/at" is usually confusing to me, sorry about that. I will check how to make the perspective clearer in the future. Thanks!
5/12/22, 2:28 PM
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