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5/13/22, 4:41 AM
Great story! Would love to see more.
5/13/22, 3:02 AM
Liking the story so far, but please don't rush it. It works really well during the hot scene, making it more intense, though. There's a lot of world building that deserves expanding and not just name dropping. Keep this up, it's gotten very interesting and now you have a large cast I hope to see more of.
5/13/22, 2:33 AM
A brilliant chapter overall, with a heartfelt, sweet and wholesome last part. Loved this, and you did a brilliant job.
5/13/22, 2:17 AM
This was the hottest, wholesomest hypno story, and it was so well done! Grats Twan!
5/13/22, 12:42 AM
Can't wait for more.
Aug 10, 2020
5/12/22, 11:12 PM
ive read this like a dozen times so it's only fair that I leave a comment now too. this story is great!
bigsad
5/12/22, 10:32 PM
The coils to the vore to the tentacles? Pushes all the right buttons. Plus some neighbor drama? I think this was your best chapter yet.
Spiralthiago
5/12/22, 9:40 PM
very good story I loved the transformations the story is very hot 🤤🤤🔥🔥🔥
5/12/22, 7:31 PM
Welcome to the club of authors! The idea of your story is very nice, but please consider using Grammarly and a proofreader from the Discord to improve the language! Still, loved the idea!

5/12/22, 9:19 PM
@Transformheaven thank you, i will try to used it!
SlutForHypno
5/12/22, 3:15 AM
The Next Chapter will be the finale of this series. It had been very fun to write (and hopefully to read.) but I do not want to risk this series getting stale. Therefore it will end with the final trial of Kaa's favorite bois. Either way, this series has been hell fun so thanks for reading. Also, let me know what you guys think of the memory alteration aspect. I used this to experiment with a 3 part story I plan to write involving memory changed. I actually have to multi part series lined up based on some RPs i did with a guy (well at least started lol). One of which is a 3 parter involving Naga brothers hypnotizing a couple of anthros at a college frat party, who may or may not have been sold to them (there is a twist to it.) This is the story involving memory change. The other story involves a human prince being forced to marry the dragon king who conquered his kingdom...and resist falling in love... Needless to say. this story also involves copious amount so hypnosis I plan on doing both, but if you have a preference do let me know. Other than that tank you for reading the series and as always comments and critiques are always appreciated

5/12/22, 7:26 PM
@SlutForHypno looking forewords to the dragon story, well, to bad next part is the finale, I was going to suggest adding Kronk to the harem

SlutForHypno
5/12/22, 9:04 PM
@darkblade2814 Yea Sorry about that. Its getting tougher for me to find creative ways for Kaa to hypnotize people and I don't want to get burnt out. But I will very much keep Kronk in mind for future stories....We cant just ignore the worlds best Himbo. That said, I'm glad you've enjoyed this series. Im also glad to hear you're excited about the Dragon one. The prince isn't too excited for it, but a good fucking might just change that