Recent Comments

5/13/22, 7:05 AM
Oh god that was unfairly hot, you managed to rack up the bullying/humiliation without making it too uncomfortable to read. Keep up the good work, and I wouldn't mind reading a sequel to this at all!
5/13/22, 4:41 AM
Great story! Would love to see more.
5/13/22, 3:02 AM
Liking the story so far, but please don't rush it. It works really well during the hot scene, making it more intense, though. There's a lot of world building that deserves expanding and not just name dropping. Keep this up, it's gotten very interesting and now you have a large cast I hope to see more of.
5/13/22, 2:33 AM
A brilliant chapter overall, with a heartfelt, sweet and wholesome last part. Loved this, and you did a brilliant job.
5/13/22, 2:17 AM
This was the hottest, wholesomest hypno story, and it was so well done! Grats Twan!
5/13/22, 12:42 AM
Can't wait for more.
Aug 10, 2020
5/12/22, 11:12 PM
ive read this like a dozen times so it's only fair that I leave a comment now too. this story is great!
bigsad
5/12/22, 10:32 PM
The coils to the vore to the tentacles? Pushes all the right buttons. Plus some neighbor drama? I think this was your best chapter yet.
Spiralthiago
5/12/22, 9:40 PM
very good story I loved the transformations the story is very hot 🤤🤤🔥🔥🔥
5/12/22, 7:31 PM
Welcome to the club of authors! The idea of your story is very nice, but please consider using Grammarly and a proofreader from the Discord to improve the language! Still, loved the idea!

5/12/22, 9:19 PM
@Transformheaven thank you, i will try to used it!