Recent Comments

5/9/22, 3:34 PM
Great storyline. Can’t wait to continue reading more. Keep the chapters cumming.
5/9/22, 3:14 PM
Totally hot! Agreed with Hypnothrill -- reading would be easier with more paragraph breaks in the dialogue sections. The step by step brain erasure is a real turn-on!
5/9/22, 3:10 PM
I’m loving it, please keep going
May 9, 2022
5/9/22, 2:04 PM
Very hot transformation! I wish I could turn off the part of my brain that cares about stuff like this, but I was pretty bothered by how the 1st person narrator constantly told us about things he couldn't possibly know, like conversations that happened when he was asleep. This is a story that would work so much better told in the 3rd person.
Grieyson
5/9/22, 1:51 PM
I hope you will have more to add to the story! This series was well written and very hot 🔥
5/9/22, 12:37 PM
Another great chapter!

5/9/22, 12:56 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast thamk you so much, Brother. Hail Pharaoh

5/9/22, 1:12 PM
@Slave Darius Hail Pharaoh! May many blades strike down the hidden enemy. Once they reveal themselves so shall we.

5/9/22, 1:30 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast and may the ones who are stricken down whilst in their bondage receive the gift of life from our Father and rise again to serve Him.
5/9/22, 1:07 PM
I too would love to hear the story of dimboy! regardless, this whole thing was a really fun idea that you executed really well!
Evan
5/9/22, 7:37 AM
Quite a start. It is aching to know these three men had found someone to confide themselves in and find a comfort in life at a very alienating time. And yet, it seems it did not go well. The story and behaviours read very believably like the era. I am brought to mind of some period pieces I've seen and I so easily see the well-to-do splashing money about to keep separated and proper. And the way they address one another. Stiffly formal and last names as what they call one another. I enjoyed the call-out that the intent from Lock was not formality and propriety but a barrier. The emotion is so raw in all of it. From the unveiling of his own desires and denials to the clear heartbreak of loss. It is a difficult read and yet so wonderfully written. Not to mention, a cruel mystery of what happened teasing one to push through that woe in morbid curiosity.

5/9/22, 1:05 PM
@Evan Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story! It's one I love a lot even though it's a bit of a misfit. I worked hard to research the language of the era. I wanted to get at that confusion and sincere desire and denial of self. I hope I'm not being too cruel in spurring you forward and that you'll enjoy the rewards along the way 💖
Anonymous
5/9/22, 12:33 PM
Wow this was hot! Not normally into bi stuff, but between the mind-fuck and the pegging this was fucking scorching! Loving the dynamic between Rachel Keegan and Sean, can’t wait to see more.
5/9/22, 8:54 AM
Hey there, I know this was suppose to be a sexy story but I just ended up feeling so sad for Sam and was so sad that Sam couldn't have such a great man like Mark in his life to father him through his 20s and early 30s. You have done an amazing job writing your characters. I really connected with both of them. I guess that's why I felt more sad than horny hahaha

5/9/22, 12:29 PM
@James Heller thanks for your kind words! Sam just got started on his journey, and I can promise he will find what he needs along the way. I hope to take you along for the ride.

5/9/22, 12:31 PM
@Essex I'm excited to join you for the ride. Thank you for writing your stories, we appreciate it!