Recent Comments

5/10/22, 12:13 AM
Disappointed story ended when it did. I personally would have like more nipple play for both boys; but that's my male nipple fettish. I hope the story continues soon.
5/10/22, 12:11 AM
I love every chapter more than the previous one
5/9/22, 10:17 PM
Nice. Please continue
5/9/22, 5:59 PM
So excited to see this progress, been craving some ctf :)
5/9/22, 5:06 PM
Oooh this is already quite the strong start! I can't wait to read what happens next.

5/9/22, 5:09 PM
@Twan Andersen surprised to find your comment! Thank you for reading, let's see what happens.
5/9/22, 4:58 PM
I liked all the parts of this story. Great job!
5/9/22, 8:18 AM
Thanks for kind words, glad to be of a little help. I'm enjoying the different perspectives and widening of possibilities of where story goes. I'm sure the excitement will deepen as the brainwashing continues..

5/9/22, 4:36 PM
@DriftingScot No, it is for me to thank you for your input. I'm planning one further chapter but perhaps I can then open the story up so other people can add to it
5/8/22, 7:09 PM
Okay,interested to see where this goes from now on. We did move away from the original premise but...I actually quite like Paul. He sounds fun. Let's see what happens next

5/9/22, 4:35 PM
@ForgottenCradle Aha, another fan of grunting braiwashed skinheads. I always enjoy putting hypnotised doms to good use
EntrancedGay92
5/8/22, 6:54 PM
Not a bad detour, it's nice seeing inside Warwick's mind. I can empathize with the son, concerning basically falling in love with your tist. My first tist had the same effect on me lol. I'm keen to see how this hypno chamber plays a role in future chapters. Looking forward to seeing dad hypnotized again ;)

5/9/22, 4:32 PM
@EntrancedGay92 Thanks for your kind comments. I'm pulling ideas for the next (final) chapter, so at present everything is on the table - including putting any character into the brainwashing chamber and then deciding their outcome
5/8/22, 6:00 PM
its well written, but i wont lie. the fic's moved on from the premise of "dad uses his sons shared interest in hypnosis to seduce him" and I feel like it suffers for it...

5/9/22, 4:30 PM
@fleed412 Thanks for your comments. I am aware that the plotline has drifted a bit, my intention was to bring the three main characters up to a single point in time, giving each a narrative from their own perspective. I am planning another (final) chapeter to the story that hopefully will resolve the different narrative perspectives - let me know if there is anything that you'd like it to include.