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EntrancedGay92
5/8/22, 6:54 PM
Not a bad detour, it's nice seeing inside Warwick's mind. I can empathize with the son, concerning basically falling in love with your tist. My first tist had the same effect on me lol. I'm keen to see how this hypno chamber plays a role in future chapters. Looking forward to seeing dad hypnotized again ;)

5/9/22, 4:32 PM
@EntrancedGay92 Thanks for your kind comments. I'm pulling ideas for the next (final) chapter, so at present everything is on the table - including putting any character into the brainwashing chamber and then deciding their outcome
5/8/22, 6:00 PM
its well written, but i wont lie. the fic's moved on from the premise of "dad uses his sons shared interest in hypnosis to seduce him" and I feel like it suffers for it...

5/9/22, 4:30 PM
@fleed412 Thanks for your comments. I am aware that the plotline has drifted a bit, my intention was to bring the three main characters up to a single point in time, giving each a narrative from their own perspective. I am planning another (final) chapeter to the story that hopefully will resolve the different narrative perspectives - let me know if there is anything that you'd like it to include.
5/8/22, 4:53 AM
Fuck yes! Goddamn you can weave a wicked story. You put me right there in the story every time. I get hard the second I see that you’ve posted another chapter to this story. I love the characters and by the time I’ve finished the new chapter my cock is always leaking like a broken faucet. Time to stroke a nut out now. Thanks man.

5/8/22, 4:55 AM
@John Rogers thanks man! I'm glad you liked it!

Anonymous
5/9/22, 4:04 PM
@Jack Parker
5/9/22, 3:35 PM
Keep up the good work.
5/9/22, 3:34 PM
Great storyline. Can’t wait to continue reading more. Keep the chapters cumming.
5/9/22, 3:14 PM
Totally hot! Agreed with Hypnothrill -- reading would be easier with more paragraph breaks in the dialogue sections. The step by step brain erasure is a real turn-on!
5/9/22, 3:10 PM
I’m loving it, please keep going
May 9, 2022
5/9/22, 2:04 PM
Very hot transformation! I wish I could turn off the part of my brain that cares about stuff like this, but I was pretty bothered by how the 1st person narrator constantly told us about things he couldn't possibly know, like conversations that happened when he was asleep. This is a story that would work so much better told in the 3rd person.
Grieyson
5/9/22, 1:51 PM
I hope you will have more to add to the story! This series was well written and very hot 🔥
5/9/22, 12:37 PM
Another great chapter!

5/9/22, 12:56 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast thamk you so much, Brother. Hail Pharaoh

5/9/22, 1:12 PM
@Slave Darius Hail Pharaoh! May many blades strike down the hidden enemy. Once they reveal themselves so shall we.

5/9/22, 1:30 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast and may the ones who are stricken down whilst in their bondage receive the gift of life from our Father and rise again to serve Him.