Recent Comments

5/8/22, 6:00 PM
its well written, but i wont lie. the fic's moved on from the premise of "dad uses his sons shared interest in hypnosis to seduce him" and I feel like it suffers for it...

5/9/22, 4:30 PM
@fleed412 Thanks for your comments. I am aware that the plotline has drifted a bit, my intention was to bring the three main characters up to a single point in time, giving each a narrative from their own perspective. I am planning another (final) chapeter to the story that hopefully will resolve the different narrative perspectives - let me know if there is anything that you'd like it to include.
5/8/22, 4:53 AM
Fuck yes! Goddamn you can weave a wicked story. You put me right there in the story every time. I get hard the second I see that you’ve posted another chapter to this story. I love the characters and by the time I’ve finished the new chapter my cock is always leaking like a broken faucet. Time to stroke a nut out now. Thanks man.

5/8/22, 4:55 AM
@John Rogers thanks man! I'm glad you liked it!

Anonymous
5/9/22, 4:04 PM
@Jack Parker
5/9/22, 3:35 PM
Keep up the good work.
5/9/22, 3:34 PM
Great storyline. Can’t wait to continue reading more. Keep the chapters cumming.
5/9/22, 3:14 PM
Totally hot! Agreed with Hypnothrill -- reading would be easier with more paragraph breaks in the dialogue sections. The step by step brain erasure is a real turn-on!
5/9/22, 3:10 PM
I’m loving it, please keep going
May 9, 2022
5/9/22, 2:04 PM
Very hot transformation! I wish I could turn off the part of my brain that cares about stuff like this, but I was pretty bothered by how the 1st person narrator constantly told us about things he couldn't possibly know, like conversations that happened when he was asleep. This is a story that would work so much better told in the 3rd person.
Grieyson
5/9/22, 1:51 PM
I hope you will have more to add to the story! This series was well written and very hot 🔥
5/9/22, 12:37 PM
Another great chapter!

5/9/22, 12:56 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast thamk you so much, Brother. Hail Pharaoh

5/9/22, 1:12 PM
@Slave Darius Hail Pharaoh! May many blades strike down the hidden enemy. Once they reveal themselves so shall we.

5/9/22, 1:30 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast and may the ones who are stricken down whilst in their bondage receive the gift of life from our Father and rise again to serve Him.
5/9/22, 1:07 PM
I too would love to hear the story of dimboy! regardless, this whole thing was a really fun idea that you executed really well!