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autoDream
5/7/22, 9:41 PM
I wasn't planning on following up anytime soon, no. Was mostly a one shot. I think I had written along side one of the competition ideas but didn't want to enter it.
5/7/22, 9:35 PM
Suspense is the kink alright And yeah a mix of both describes it all Nice og daniel back and gets some love and affection but also remaking. Smooth move by billy too. A sort of living effigy of the bad parts but out in the open to mollify while also multiplying strength of and levers on daniel. Gwtting kingdom hearts up in here but more rapid and coherent with better focus
5/7/22, 9:22 PM
Great job on the progressive dumbing down and how he kept progressively changing and not being able to stop it. Really looking forward to the next part.
8/13/21, 8:01 PM
A good continuation apart from the whole servants aren't people idea. If they are mental constructs I can accept that but if they are actual people I dislike it.

8/13/21, 11:25 PM
@Cutlerfan I think that either option is chilling in its own way. Who is real and who isn't? (I'll leave that up to the reader) In either case it shows a distinct difference between Daniel and his Papa.

5/7/22, 8:56 PM
@Norismo yep. It does. Sergei is talking more though.
5/7/22, 7:05 PM
What a great, great great, story! Love the idea, the characters, the ship design, the sex. Such a great idea and such a great story/chapter. Also I totally like the characters, and would totally enjoy seeing Frank getting fucked. hehe So yeah, great stuff. So cool.

5/7/22, 8:46 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks for the inspiration! Like we discussed on the Discord there's lots of potential in this vein and I'm hoping to tap some! Glad you liked!
5/7/22, 8:44 PM
I really liked it. The twist was well executed and, overall, it was very sexy, keeping up with the switches in persona.
5/7/22, 7:49 PM
Very nice twists ! Well done !
5/7/22, 7:28 PM
I like these events and seeing him dominating people. It's so fun.
5/7/22, 7:12 PM
Incredibly well written. Very hot concept. Also, your backside is very hot. Can’t wait to keep reading!
5/7/22, 7:06 PM
After chapters of teasing and set up the long lost identical twin arrives. Complete with boytoy copy. Getting Bewitched up in here