Recent Comments

5/7/22, 2:30 PM
What an awesome chapter, I love how Xander is finally getting to feel the love that he deserves from Lucas, can’t wait to read more!
5/7/22, 1:51 PM
Not only is the story excellently crafted, but the world building and lore begin to shine. The story is undoubtedly sexy and our protagonist is just such a treat. I liked the shift in focus and that Finn is on the edges but not yet back into focus. The djinn consciousness was a very interesting surprise, but most of all, you started talking in gaming/mmo language and you totally got me there! I hope you continue building this up as it has a lot of promise for fun.
Anonymous
5/7/22, 1:36 PM
I know it's been years but would still love to see another chapter of this series!
5/7/22, 12:53 PM
Great story!
5/7/22, 11:58 AM
GodDAMN that was fucking explosively hot! Love to read about guys giving in to the urge to dominate. Excellent work as usual, sir!
5/5/22, 8:18 AM
Hot story, there was an error in displaying the word length so I resubmitted it. Definitely hyped to see where this story goes for sure.

5/7/22, 10:55 AM
@Norismo thank you for doing that :)
5/6/22, 9:40 PM
Not since Morgan Blackthorne's 'A Breed Apart' have I read such well-crafted prose about debasement, desperate craven sluttiness, and unwitting mental transformation/enslavement. Bravo!! I encourage you to write more.

5/7/22, 10:55 AM
@Rock Creek Werewolf with comments like that, of course I will. You keep my writer's fuel burning ;)
JR
5/7/22, 10:50 AM
Love this story. I can’t wait until the next chapter.
5/7/22, 10:41 AM
Not sure if like papa or not. Sure mildred wasn't good but is just a divorce impossible? And things were fine with the new livers. This feels much like mildred. Warping identity to fulfill own design Oh fuck this is hiddy, fun, hot Sad not his real dad. But i suppose improvement Naybe Man this confusing
5/7/22, 8:04 AM
Hell yeah!!! Oh wowwowowowowow I did NOT see that coming! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

5/7/22, 10:30 AM
@NeedControlling thanks man!