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5/7/22, 10:10 AM
Hah, orgy, bondage, ghost attack, mixed with puss orgy polymarriage So...danny was always super and or magic, its not just the town?
5/7/22, 10:03 AM
Sorry I didn't get a chance to comment earlier when you shared the draft with me, but I think this is really good stuff! I always like a good personality change and dumbing down story, and I think this one is well-done, giving us a good feel for John's transformation into Johnnie. I only had two suggestions: 1) Be more generous with the paragraph breaks. When you have dialogue from two different characters in the same paragraph, it becomes hard to tell them apart. 2) Sometimes the dialogue seems less "dumbed down" and more "working-class characters from a 1950s movie." So just think carefully about your word choices. The story ends up going to some really hot places, so I'd expect a lot of positive reader feedback coming your way!
5/7/22, 9:38 AM
I am so sorry never gave your work focus deserves. Feels like the oerfect gay version if calving signs/cristina price/Charles wallace The tension he is spiraling more But also so sweet
5/7/22, 9:20 AM
Yikes. Billy is...an asshole but seems to want to have a heart of gold He is so the guy with too many debts everyone likes I am not sure what real regarding wife orhis health
5/7/22, 7:48 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. So happy that you have plans for continuing this story. Definitely enjoyed the exploration of how djinns and their powers work in this universe. I would certainly enjoy a spin-off chapter that explores what other djinns have done if you ever wanted to take a break from the main story-line. Can't wait to see more!
5/1/22, 5:51 PM
Love ideas quick enticing mood piece Even the critical [comments] boil down to, wish for more Thank you

5/7/22, 7:34 AM
@Darmani Thank you! I'll get around to writing a chapter 2 of Ambrosia some day :sweat_smile:
5/6/22, 4:43 AM
Yay! The boys found their place and Jack found how to have fun with toys. And having said that, how fantastic is it that the story evokes such tenderness and brings forth such emotion? In the end they found love in their sharing of themselves in the way that works for them and reality shifts to allow it. Brilliant.

5/7/22, 7:33 AM
@Essex Thank you so much for your continued support! Jack of Hearts of loads of fun to write for sure!
5/6/22, 7:31 PM
I would have loved to hear the reflections of the two controlled men as they had their new haircuts, bleaching treatment, body waxing, and tanning sessions which were formerly not part of their routine. It feels like they should be fighting these changes a bit although our “villain” will always get his way in the end.

5/7/22, 7:19 AM
Yes would have been hot @Sub4Taylor
5/7/22, 6:23 AM
Will this story be continued?
Evan
5/7/22, 3:55 AM
Absolutely amazing chapter. The break down of resistance, acceptance. Hotness. Fuck. You're a master at this.