Recent Comments

5/6/22, 11:08 PM
Returning to this story, it still is the best I ever read. His unending thirst for power is just amazing. You are such a gifted writer!
Muscle-Flex
5/6/22, 6:39 PM
Another excellent chapter. Don't worry about the length. Your chapters should be whatever length it takes to tell the story as you want to tell it. The combination of perspectives is fun! And now that the Doc has left a text telling Markus what he is going to do to him, we get to watch Markus struggle and try to resist! The ear buds.... Did the Doc put some kind of special earbud into Markus's ears the last time he had him in the medical exam room?

5/6/22, 7:16 PM
@Muscle-Flex I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter ^^ I always get a little worried when my chapters don't do too hot. However it's great to see that some people enjoy my story. And in terms of the earbuds, will, was it the first or last doctor visit. Who's to say 👀
5/6/22, 6:57 PM
Well... I like it the first time I read it... and still like it now :3 :blue_heart: :blue_heart: :blue_heart: I know is notnyour style to be dark and twisted, but I really like what you did here ^ ^ amazing, I love it :3 <3
5/6/22, 6:15 PM
Good for Brian's girl Shell have fun training him for Preston
JD1
5/5/22, 7:46 PM
Miss you <3

Adonis
5/6/22, 5:38 PM
@JD1 I miss me too
chen
5/6/22, 1:56 PM
Highly creative, solid writing

5/6/22, 5:16 PM
@chen Thanks so much for the comment. It is appreciated.
5/6/22, 2:49 AM
This was so hot. And a great foundation for a future story. I can't wait to see what happens next One thing I'm wondering, what will the kinky punishment be? I can see it being an ironic punishment. Like it's based in whatever punishment you lost at. However, It could also be something completely different Like what if the loosers are sold off as slaves to pay for the winner? Maybe even the runner up. Like "here's your 50'000. Unfortunately, as your now this fine gentleman's slave, it will be going to him" Idk, just what I thought of as I read. Can't wait to see where this is going. And I hope some foot fetish, socks/shoe fetish is involved at some point. That's my favourite. Or maybe being trapped in latex would be a good fetish to involve. Who knows. Your the author so we'll have to wait and see what you decide

5/6/22, 4:50 PM
@Rubber_Lover Love your comment. Tysm and glad you enjoyed! Their will definetly be various types of kinks down the line!
5/4/22, 3:43 AM
Love the wholesomeness!

5/6/22, 3:56 PM
@astrologus thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
boi98229
5/18/21, 5:50 AM
Thank you so much!! I use hypnosis as a subject all the time, and really enjoy the experience. I often wonder exactly how far I might go with an experienced face-to-face hypnotist and the time to develop a comfortable tist/subject relationship. Your piece here is the most realistic scenario for partners who have no real former experience but want to try hypnosis. I thought the approach you devised for them to develop their experience and skills was logical and ingenious. I am curious to know what training or experience you might actually have with hypnosis. In any case you have a lot of wonderful options to continue the story. Apparently like the rest of your fans, I would love to read more. Thanks again! ~David

5/6/22, 3:56 PM
@boi98229 I'm so glad you enjoyed it — thank you! I have zero real-world experience with hypnosis (other than having tried out some induction videos and had the same feeling Dan has, of playing along rather than really "being hypnotized" as such); this was my attempt to imagine what it would feel like. I hope you'll enjoy the second installment, although it's less about the process and more about the result.
5/11/21, 3:25 PM
I'm seconding Martin's request - please continue the story! It was well written and perfectly paced!

5/6/22, 3:54 PM
@el mexicano 4091 thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it — and I hope you'll enjoy the second installment! :-D