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5/5/22, 4:57 PM
What hot twists!
5/5/22, 1:18 AM
A fine ending. It was wrapped up in a nice package. The journey was an epic one with highs and lows like a rollercoaster. I put off reading the last part until today because I wanted to take the time and enjoy it thoughtfully. I guess the one thing I can say that is a compliment but does not give away any spoilers is that it is a very real look at different Earth world that may exist in another dimension. Nothing was out of place. There were warm and good feelings of love and bonding; and the feelings of isolation, regret, and pain. A completely believable exploration of alternate sexualities. Nothing was sugar coated to gloss over suffering nor made disturbing to offend without reason. These people were totally human just with different life experiences. Literally every time I read a new chapter I was there. There was no suspension of disbelief, no transition; just being there like walking through a mirror. A story that tugged at heart strings without being cutesy. A genuine romance like the classics. Thank you for this story; this saga.

5/5/22, 12:17 PM
@Cutlerfan Feedback like this has made posting my story on this site worthwhile. I was quite nervous about how people would react to my 'gender wonky' take on being a man without a dick, having tits and a funny voice. It seemed like it was too niche. Now I have written that it really does seem niche. Anyway, I am pleased the story worked for some people and reeled them into a world that I loved creating. Thanks for your feedback and comments along the way they meant a lot to me.
5/5/22, 9:24 AM
Say, this is really fun! There are some editing issues (tense changes and formatting stuff), but the overall idea is really cool. I also love the double twist at the end! It makes you wonder who is real and who isn’t. Great stuff! :)
Wishful Thinking
5/5/22, 6:12 AM
It’s astonishing to me how every one of your stories I’ve read is consistently amazing, and this one is no exception. Your “Hey, Little Buddy” series is what got me into musk in the first place, and this is just spectacular.
SlutForHypno
5/5/22, 5:02 AM
Yeah so I actually really enjoyed writing this chapter. Which is why it came out so quickly in all honesty. Zidane is really hot and I found a fun way to corrupt him. Really happy with how it turned out and will definitely be using him in the final chapter. As some of you saw, I may or may not have started a sequel to my Hypno University series. That one also including Fictional Characters (who knows Sora might make a cameo there too). But I do still intend to finish this series up. Theres only about 2 or 3 more chapters left depending on if people would like Tidus or not. That said I am still open to requests or criticisms. Next week should be pretty obvious what its going to be. But its Ok. The place may soon have 3 Princesses (male) instead of 1
5/4/22, 10:56 PM
Each chapter gets better. Their progression goes faster, their submission comes closer. Great job!

Rub.berized
5/5/22, 3:53 AM
@Essex it's nice to read that feedback. I also feel that I get a better grip on how I want the story to develop and learn more about their submission.
Will Ryder
5/5/22, 3:17 AM
Hey Tomozco..! 😁 Thanks so much 4 a brilliant series👍 Your imagination, world building, character development & execution of this story was: 💯GENIUS!!💯 I particularly loved the relationship between Derek & Daniel. Derek's love, loyalty & seduction by his younger bro was beautifully written 📝👨💖👨📝 I'm glad they got a happy ending 🍌😘🍑 The inclusion of Jason @ the end was a brilliant move. It would be interesting if you carried on with the story with him & his 🆕 team mates also suffering an unfortunate accident & ending up @ 👤The🏢MCP👤 He would get to meet his 19 year old Dad, Daniel & his ever-loving older bro Derek 👨💖👨 Well done & much thanks👍
5/5/22, 2:19 AM
very hot love the stories from this gym
Will Ryder
5/5/22, 2:11 AM
Derek's capture & conversion was brilliantly written 📖🤓📖 His descent in2 becoming an MCP cum donor via his little bro Daniel & his team mates was super 🔥H🥵T🔥 Particularly those closing paragraphs: "However, after four hours of non-stop virtual orgies, the movements gradually became weaker, until there were only some minor tensing and jolting. As the orgasm counter registered the seventh shot from GB-196, the unit barely tensed anymore, and soon joined the quiet and unmoving state as the rest of his fellows around the table, becoming a steady display fixture of the MCP Institute, always ready to contribute his next load, on and on…" It would be gr8 if Derek also caught up with his friends Devon, Eric & Scott 🍌😘🍑 By the looks of thing's, there's more chapters which is: 💯AWES🤩ME!!💯
5/5/22, 12:09 AM
Musk. Submission. Obedience. What else can a guy ask for? 🤤