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Bimarguy
5/5/22, 11:31 PM
I also am a fan of musk ,so glad adams is getting used to it . He is so lucky lol
5/5/22, 5:45 PM
You have the awe-inducing ability of writing with an almost heteronymic style - the Norismo that writes Pokémon Himbo Sun could be a different person from the Norismo who wrote this. It shows just how _brilliant_ of a writer you are. The mixture of control and tenderness was done really, really well. Keep up the amazing work!

5/5/22, 11:01 PM
@Twan Andersen I hope you're looking forward to approving dozens more chapters in the dalton creek saga :grin:
Jerry
5/5/22, 10:40 PM
That was fantastic. I really love your writing.
5/5/22, 7:03 PM
I don't normally like dad and son stuff as much as brothers, but I did appreciate these somewhat wholesomeness that this chapter had. Wonderful work.

Blackjinx123
5/5/22, 9:17 PM
@NicoMindSlayer95, thank you so much! I’m always happy to see people enjoying my story no matter the reason. Thanks for the comment :grinning:
Martin
5/5/22, 8:32 PM
Intriguing start, I look forward reading the rest. I feel sorry for Lee, though. And I already hate the professor :)

5/5/22, 8:58 PM
@Martin Yeah Lee got it pretty harsh and it will only get more competitive and intense from here :smiling_imp: Professor is a fun villain to write!
5/5/22, 7:45 PM
I had a great time reading this! So excited the story is back and thank you for choosing me as one of the characters! I can’t wait to see what’s next for Sebastian hah And I too, an a Nike slut so that was a good little bit you put in there. I was swooning!

5/5/22, 8:57 PM
@Footnotized Tysm! I knew you would like that bit haha. Lots in store for you and all other characters.
Martin
5/5/22, 8:47 PM
You need to x-post that series to Cupid so we can rate on "Romance" as well!
Gingcub
5/5/22, 6:04 PM
Fucking love these chapters! Great job, man. Would definitely enjoy more doctor perspective—that’s hot stuff!

5/5/22, 8:15 PM
@Gingcub I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree that seeing the docs perspective is very interesting. I think it would probably be beneficial going forward. So the readers such as yourself can see what's been happening to Markus.
5/5/22, 8:14 PM
Great job. Love skinhead conversation stories.
5/5/22, 1:04 AM
besides getting dr. strange caught too?, why not get the guradians of the galaxy and hulk involved too?

5/5/22, 1:56 AM
@darkblade2814 I'm planning on all of them getting involved, including the Fantastic Four...I'm just not sure about the plot of the second part. I know I don't want the necklace to become super power that can convert everybody instantly. That's why the necklace teleported everybody out as Dr. Strange can counteract the effects and Strange shielded the other superheroes.

5/5/22, 1:58 AM
@tyl7897 one idea is that the necklace gains power for each person it affects, it still needs to grind until it can affect someone like Dr. Strange or Quill

5/5/22, 2:26 AM
@darkblade2814 Yeah, maybe...I'll message you on discord if you want? So we can discuss this further?

5/5/22, 9:02 AM
@tyl7897 yes we can

5/5/22, 5:53 PM
@darkblade2814 I messaged you!!

5/5/22, 6:04 PM
@tyl7897 okay