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SlutForHypno
5/5/22, 5:02 AM
Yeah so I actually really enjoyed writing this chapter. Which is why it came out so quickly in all honesty. Zidane is really hot and I found a fun way to corrupt him. Really happy with how it turned out and will definitely be using him in the final chapter. As some of you saw, I may or may not have started a sequel to my Hypno University series. That one also including Fictional Characters (who knows Sora might make a cameo there too). But I do still intend to finish this series up. Theres only about 2 or 3 more chapters left depending on if people would like Tidus or not. That said I am still open to requests or criticisms. Next week should be pretty obvious what its going to be. But its Ok. The place may soon have 3 Princesses (male) instead of 1
5/4/22, 10:56 PM
Each chapter gets better. Their progression goes faster, their submission comes closer. Great job!

Rub.berized
5/5/22, 3:53 AM
@Essex it's nice to read that feedback. I also feel that I get a better grip on how I want the story to develop and learn more about their submission.
Will Ryder
5/5/22, 3:17 AM
Hey Tomozco..! 😁 Thanks so much 4 a brilliant seriesπŸ‘ Your imagination, world building, character development & execution of this story was: πŸ’―GENIUS!!πŸ’― I particularly loved the relationship between Derek & Daniel. Derek's love, loyalty & seduction by his younger bro was beautifully written πŸ“πŸ‘¨πŸ’–πŸ‘¨πŸ“ I'm glad they got a happy ending πŸŒπŸ˜˜πŸ‘ The inclusion of Jason @ the end was a brilliant move. It would be interesting if you carried on with the story with him & his πŸ†• team mates also suffering an unfortunate accident & ending up @ πŸ‘€The🏒MCPπŸ‘€ He would get to meet his 19 year old Dad, Daniel & his ever-loving older bro Derek πŸ‘¨πŸ’–πŸ‘¨ Well done & much thanksπŸ‘
5/5/22, 2:19 AM
very hot love the stories from this gym
Will Ryder
5/5/22, 2:11 AM
Derek's capture & conversion was brilliantly written πŸ“–πŸ€“πŸ“– His descent in2 becoming an MCP cum donor via his little bro Daniel & his team mates was super πŸ”₯HπŸ₯΅TπŸ”₯ Particularly those closing paragraphs: "However, after four hours of non-stop virtual orgies, the movements gradually became weaker, until there were only some minor tensing and jolting. As the orgasm counter registered the seventh shot from GB-196, the unit barely tensed anymore, and soon joined the quiet and unmoving state as the rest of his fellows around the table, becoming a steady display fixture of the MCP Institute, always ready to contribute his next load, on and on…" It would be gr8 if Derek also caught up with his friends Devon, Eric & Scott πŸŒπŸ˜˜πŸ‘ By the looks of thing's, there's more chapters which is: πŸ’―AWES🀩ME!!πŸ’―
5/5/22, 12:09 AM
Musk. Submission. Obedience. What else can a guy ask for? 🀀
May 1, 2022
5/4/22, 11:26 PM
Well that just hit all my buttons. Great build up and really hot payoff.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/4/22, 11:21 PM
This certainly has my interest. Fascinated to see where this leads!
5/4/22, 10:30 PM
A really great start with enough seeds to want to watch them grow ;)
5/4/22, 10:07 PM
Wow now i miss seeing more sammy x john in the main parker bros series