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Anonymous
6/8/22, 1:21 PM
This is my favorite story on here in ages. I would love to see Carter get dominated by Rusty before eventually enlisting Dusty to help turn the tables on Rusty, potentially resulting a happy ending for all (pun definitely intended). Maybe I'm crazy, but I'm kind of shipping Rusty and Carter - they appear to be attracted to each other and seem to have at least a few common interests. The only issue is, of course, that Rusty is a total tool. It feels to me like his biggest problem is his overconfidence, and I feel like his desire to change Carter into a buttslut (against his will or otherwise) is not driven by malice but is just his overconfidence getting in the way of all other considerations (listening to other people's opinions/preferences, not being a jerk, etc.) Maybe Rusty's default stats have his confidence at a 5 - if Carter could turn that down to a reasonable level (and maybe turn up his maturity?) Rusty could potentially end up being an ok dude and partner for Carter.

6/8/22, 8:29 PM
@ Thanks! I'm glad people are picking up that Rusty isn't deliberately cruel, just horny and self-absorbed. His goal isn't to make Carter suffer or humiliate him (even though those are obvious side-effects of his attempts to make Carter enjoy himself). I'm not anticipating a redemption arc for Rusty, but I also I don't have a defined end-point for this story since I'm letting readers influence the action.
6/8/22, 6:32 PM
Of the series I still like the first chapter best so add me to list of those that hope Larry finds a way to a happy ending and wins out over Professor Pryer. Perhaps there’s more he translated than what Pryer knew about.

6/8/22, 7:19 PM
@John Manning I'd actually love it if Jonathan (not Larry) is the one who gets the upper hand over Prof. Pryer. There would be some poetic justice in that, since Pryer has reshaped Jonathan into his perverted mini-me.
6/8/22, 7:03 PM
I'm more on Larry's side of hypnosis use so yeah the removal of romance is meh to me. That said I also like maybe Larry wanting more than one good boy so maybe he gains such a want.
Jun 7, 2022
Anonymous
6/8/22, 5:30 AM
Love. A bit confused as to why it switched to wade instead of James or Jim at the beginning but great.

6/8/22, 6:52 PM
Thanks for catching that. Originally he was going to be named Wade, but I decided against it. Thought I corrected everything, but, eh, missed a paragraph@
6/8/22, 6:03 PM
W. T. F. This is darkly realistic, you basically wrote The Child Called It & Uzma Bibi's case. It scars me.
6/8/22, 5:58 PM
I'm so glad this series was mentioned over on the forum otherwise I'd never have read it. It's an older story, plus it's an amulet story and those are usually not my taste. But this is a very hot story and a great set-up for circular karma.
6/8/22, 5:21 PM
Love the story!
6/8/22, 4:51 PM
Really good start to a new series I would love to read more from. I liked the two brothers a lot.
Anonymous
6/8/22, 4:47 PM
Yeah, I'm with Hypnothrill, I'm really hoping that Pryer experiences a truly magnificent crash and burn and gets his comeuppance. (Mostly i really would like to see Zach and Larry get back together, I thought they were sweet/cute)
Somnus
6/8/22, 3:57 PM
I am really feeling the need for more! I can see this becoming one of those world change Hypnothrill stories I return to over and over again.