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Anonymous
4/30/22, 11:42 PM
hot storyโ€ฆ the short transformation to daddy was on fire!!!
Will Ryder
4/30/22, 11:32 PM
๐Ÿ˜†โ€ผ๏ธDANGโ€ผ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜† That was a H๐Ÿ˜˜RNY read ๐Ÿ“– I ๐Ÿ’– the closing of this chapter: "The team begins rubbing and humping rhythmically together, all 30 guys in their crisp white uniforms soon become one white pulsing mass of flesh. Daniel is caught in the middle of the mass, his own lust has taken over his senses." Those sentences are brilliantly descriptive & provide a gr8 visual of Daniel & his team mates giving in2 their baser instincts ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿ’ฅ I'm definitely looking 4ward 2 the next chapter...
SlutForHypno
4/30/22, 11:15 PM
Very Cute. I love how Xander is forming a genuine relationship with Janus and the different ways they have sex is always neat to see. I wonder how experimental Xander would be willing to get to the point of temporarily altering his own memories for a rp lol
bigsad
4/30/22, 10:41 PM
That whole portion in the tent was just- wow! I hope these two go on more adventures outside the apartment
4/30/22, 10:12 PM
Omg, read this in one sitting and. Can I say that first off, how OVERJOYED I am to come across a story the best interspecies romance between a human and NAGA. THANK. YOU. Just. Their PERSONALITIES. and. The MESH. The way the HYPNOSIS was implemented. The hot STEAMY ACTION. HGSGSGSGSGHHHS -foams at the mouth- YOU'RE DOING REAL GOOD. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ
Mike Davis
4/30/22, 6:12 PM
This story is so arousing. I love the fantasy you mingle with the lowest, being the leader. The mental facility being the location gives a great sense of false security. The control Preston secretly has gives me horny goosebumps right down into my pants. On to the next chapter.
4/30/22, 5:54 PM
You've done it, you managed to make vore wholesome! I'm so curious how the plot is going to develop!

4/30/22, 6:02 PM
@Norismo I am going to use it for the series description, "The story that managed to make vore wholesome"
Archie
4/30/22, 5:31 PM
Insaaaanely hot! Love seeing the Parker Brothers making an appearance outside of their stories!
4/30/22, 3:39 PM
I absolutely loved the first chapter to this story and am pleased you decided to continue it. The sex and kinks are hot, and you write them effectively. I was even more intrigued by the feelings of despair and melancholy that you invoked as your characters consider the overdevelopment and urbanization of England's remaining green spaces. Your writing is excellent and the way you mix erotic writing with less prurient matters elevates your stories in my estimation.
4/30/22, 3:11 PM
Sammy and the bros!!! Nice!!