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4/27/22, 8:45 AM
Loved this chapter so much! I wonder if Warwick has hypnotized his father since early in the morning? i really into this kind of an unconscious induction where the subject doesn’t know what’s going to happen to him next, willingly participates and (misguidedly) puts his trust in the hypnotist. i would like to be the one of sub in my fantasy!

4/28/22, 8:19 AM
@hypnolife Thank you for your encouraging words, my plans for chapter four include introducing another character (chain-smoking skinhead type) whose financial greed will seal his own fate - what a shame (hahaha)
Rubber_Lover14
4/25/22, 4:02 PM
This is super hot! Great to see the Daddy's point of view. I can totally see how he'd convince himself that enslaving his son is for his own good "oh, he's too young to make these decisions. Better I make them for him" or even "my son's too stupid, too naive. I need to put him in his place" Just thinking about all the ways this could go, from the father enslaving the son consentually, to seeing his son as a worthless cock slave to be locked away. Or even seeing him as nothing more than property to be rented out. Just the thought of it turns me on. Can't wait to see what comes next. Side not, are you thinking of including any more kinks? Like latex, breathe play, armpits, feet, bondage, that kinda thing. Or are u going to be sticking to the kinks already displayed? I think this story could get even better with the expansion of what kinks you involve. But that's my personal opinion. Anyways, loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next part 😁

4/26/22, 7:11 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thanks for your comments, getting good feedback makes a huge difference and encourages me to continue. I'm making a start on chapter 4 exploring what happens at the Mr Warwick's laboratory (and the aftermath), probably a good point to ratchet up the kinkiness - I've never tried latex, it would be useful to get some pointers on what it feels like, so anything you can tell me about would help me add it to the plotline. Do you think the story works better from the dom's or the sub's perspective (let me know what got you harder)?

Rubber_Lover14
4/26/22, 12:15 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Okay imma be honest with you, I've never ACTUALLY used latex before. Just seen alot of vids and read alot of stories. It's really up to you what you want it to be. With Mr Warwick's lab, you could use it as an excuse to have more creative toys. Like living latex (a latex that moves and spreads on whoever it's applied to. Usually no zipper or way for the sub to remove it on their own) Also I personally prefer the Dominant point of view. But it's really up to you. Depends on what narrative you want. Do you want an unreliable narrator who's getting affected by the kinky mishaps, or a reliable narrator, where we see what's actually going on, the man's intensions. I personally like the Dom's point of view because we know what's going on from a more controlled perspective, if you know what I mean. The son already seems slutty and really into it, so from their perspective, personality wise, I don't know if they would change that much. But when we see the dad basically convince himself this is okay, well, that's a real turn on tbh. I'd love to see him become more depraved and see where it goes. Maybe he still sees his son as his son, or maybe he turns him into a slave, or legally into his property. Maybe he'll get bored of his son and sell him off to the highest, and hunkiest, bidder. I think the Dom's point of view allows us a better vantage point of the story, while letting us see the innerworkings of a man who wants so desperately to enslave his son, but morally hasn't quite convinced himself it's for the best But that's just my opinion. Your story so you do you ^^

Martin
4/26/22, 12:30 PM
@Whitechap_e1 I could tell you a bit about the feeling of being totally enclosed in a rubber suit, in case you want to write about this :sweat_smile:

Martin
4/26/22, 12:32 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 For me it's just the opposite. I always see myself in the role of the manipulated, controlled guy.... So please continue to write about both perspectives, Whitechap!

4/26/22, 3:22 PM
@Martin Huge thanks for taking the time I would love to understand more about rubber/latex - I tried being mummified in clingfilm once, it was interesting but quite uncomfortable and I didn't find it enough of a turn-on to try repeating, does latex achieve the same sensation of helplessness with rather less discomfort, or is it something else? I would really appreciate getting a realistic account. My thoughts for chapter four are to make it a twin perspective narrative as Mr Warwick and the son give their accounts of what happened in the laboratory. (Sorry, by the way for using your name without permission at the start of this chapter, hopefully you can take it in good humour, as intended)

Martin
4/26/22, 6:02 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Contact me on the forum or by email and we can talk about this. Discord is also fine! I'd be very happy to share some of my experiences with you. I was actually honored and amused by that usage of myself in your story. You can (ab)use me as much as you want!

4/28/22, 8:13 AM
@Martin thank you for your generosity, I'll be in touch later to get your perspectives on rubber, and perhaps there's a whole new genre out there of stories in which we write sories to (ab)use our generous host. Thanks so much for keeping this site going!
4/28/22, 7:47 AM
Really well written story but I am missing the hypnosis bit?
4/28/22, 6:17 AM
Please tell me the title is based on the vine 😂
toy #4
4/28/22, 5:17 AM
keep going...
toy #4
4/28/22, 5:15 AM
it's a shame Justin gave in so easily.
Anonymous
4/28/22, 5:03 AM
an achingly hot transformation story…
4/27/22, 8:29 PM
Thanks again for a great story.

4/28/22, 2:32 AM
@Clinton J Thanks for reading!
Muscle-Flex
4/28/22, 12:45 AM
Man this chapter was so hot! Great scenes, stimulatingly described! (Spoilers ahead for anyone who hasn't read the chapter.) The weight-lifting scene at the gym already had me going, and then the fun in the locker room - whew! I loved the red rope and big boy Markie squirming helplessly in his tight tethers, going in and out of clarity about what is happening to him. The hot jock just keeps sinking deeper and deeper into his predicament: the video while he gets in his morning practice (gulp), and the photos that Doc Adam now has of him in very compromising situations... talk about a sticky web! Now, Darrah... doesn't he turn out to be interesting. Heh heh. Yeah, he's going to have Markus under his thumb now. Clearly he is involved in the larger machinations taking place, especially with that reference to the "boss". But just how much control does Darrah himself have? No doubt Markie is right to worry about Doc Adam seeing those photos... I have a feeling it is going to get a little harder for our study jock to keep others from noticing that something is going on - and not just because he's going to be putting on more muscle... it might involve a bit of chrome. Anyway, thanks for another fantastic installment!

Rubber_Lover14
4/28/22, 1:28 AM
@Muscle-Flex I'm so glad you enjoyed it ^^ I was worried people weren't going to enjoy it due to its excessive length. And yeah, who knows. Darrah could be anything at this point. We'll just have to wait and see. Maybe more of the jocks are involved, or perhaps they will fall under the Docs influence thanks to our idiotic jocks actions. Honestly, I'm not sure myself. I just write whatever turns me on most in the moment. So really anything could happen. If there's anything you would like to see happen, any suggestions, ideas, or ways I could improve, please let me know. I want any future chapters to be as good as possible. So a loyal reader such as yourself giving their input would be much appreciated (If your comfortable doing so). Anyways, Have a nice day ^^ Cant wait to write chapter 5
4/28/22, 1:46 AM
Loved this chapter