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Apr 25, 2022
Rubber_Lover14
4/25/22, 4:02 PM
This is super hot! Great to see the Daddy's point of view. I can totally see how he'd convince himself that enslaving his son is for his own good "oh, he's too young to make these decisions. Better I make them for him" or even "my son's too stupid, too naive. I need to put him in his place" Just thinking about all the ways this could go, from the father enslaving the son consentually, to seeing his son as a worthless cock slave to be locked away. Or even seeing him as nothing more than property to be rented out. Just the thought of it turns me on. Can't wait to see what comes next. Side not, are you thinking of including any more kinks? Like latex, breathe play, armpits, feet, bondage, that kinda thing. Or are u going to be sticking to the kinks already displayed? I think this story could get even better with the expansion of what kinks you involve. But that's my personal opinion. Anyways, loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next part 😁
4/26/22, 7:11 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thanks for your comments, getting good feedback makes a huge difference and encourages me to continue. I'm making a start on chapter 4 exploring what happens at the Mr Warwick's laboratory (and the aftermath), probably a good point to ratchet up the kinkiness - I've never tried latex, it would be useful to get some pointers on what it feels like, so anything you can tell me about would help me add it to the plotline. Do you think the story works better from the dom's or the sub's perspective (let me know what got you harder)?
Rubber_Lover14
4/26/22, 12:15 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Okay imma be honest with you, I've never ACTUALLY used latex before. Just seen alot of vids and read alot of stories. It's really up to you what you want it to be. With Mr Warwick's lab, you could use it as an excuse to have more creative toys. Like living latex (a latex that moves and spreads on whoever it's applied to. Usually no zipper or way for the sub to remove it on their own) Also I personally prefer the Dominant point of view. But it's really up to you. Depends on what narrative you want. Do you want an unreliable narrator who's getting affected by the kinky mishaps, or a reliable narrator, where we see what's actually going on, the man's intensions. I personally like the Dom's point of view because we know what's going on from a more controlled perspective, if you know what I mean. The son already seems slutty and really into it, so from their perspective, personality wise, I don't know if they would change that much. But when we see the dad basically convince himself this is okay, well, that's a real turn on tbh. I'd love to see him become more depraved and see where it goes. Maybe he still sees his son as his son, or maybe he turns him into a slave, or legally into his property. Maybe he'll get bored of his son and sell him off to the highest, and hunkiest, bidder. I think the Dom's point of view allows us a better vantage point of the story, while letting us see the innerworkings of a man who wants so desperately to enslave his son, but morally hasn't quite convinced himself it's for the best But that's just my opinion. Your story so you do you ^^
Martin
4/26/22, 12:30 PM
@Whitechap_e1 I could tell you a bit about the feeling of being totally enclosed in a rubber suit, in case you want to write about this :sweat_smile:
Martin
4/26/22, 12:32 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 For me it's just the opposite. I always see myself in the role of the manipulated, controlled guy.... So please continue to write about both perspectives, Whitechap!
4/26/22, 3:22 PM
@Martin Huge thanks for taking the time I would love to understand more about rubber/latex - I tried being mummified in clingfilm once, it was interesting but quite uncomfortable and I didn't find it enough of a turn-on to try repeating, does latex achieve the same sensation of helplessness with rather less discomfort, or is it something else? I would really appreciate getting a realistic account. My thoughts for chapter four are to make it a twin perspective narrative as Mr Warwick and the son give their accounts of what happened in the laboratory. (Sorry, by the way for using your name without permission at the start of this chapter, hopefully you can take it in good humour, as intended)
Martin
4/26/22, 6:02 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Contact me on the forum or by email and we can talk about this. Discord is also fine! I'd be very happy to share some of my experiences with you. I was actually honored and amused by that usage of myself in your story. You can (ab)use me as much as you want!
4/28/22, 8:13 AM
@Martin thank you for your generosity, I'll be in touch later to get your perspectives on rubber, and perhaps there's a whole new genre out there of stories in which we write sories to (ab)use our generous host. Thanks so much for keeping this site going!
Apr 27, 2022
4/28/22, 7:47 AM
Really well written story but I am missing the hypnosis bit?
Apr 27, 2022
4/28/22, 6:17 AM
Please tell me the title is based on the vine 😂
Apr 22, 2022
toy #4
4/28/22, 5:17 AM
keep going...
Apr 27, 2022
toy #4
4/28/22, 5:15 AM
it's a shame Justin gave in so easily.
Mar 26, 2022
Anonymous
4/28/22, 5:03 AM
an achingly hot transformation story…
Apr 27, 2022
4/27/22, 8:29 PM
Thanks again for a great story.
4/28/22, 2:32 AM
@Clinton J Thanks for reading!
Apr 25, 2022
Muscle-Flex
4/28/22, 12:45 AM
Man this chapter was so hot! Great scenes, stimulatingly described! (Spoilers ahead for anyone who hasn't read the chapter.) The weight-lifting scene at the gym already had me going, and then the fun in the locker room - whew! I loved the red rope and big boy Markie squirming helplessly in his tight tethers, going in and out of clarity about what is happening to him. The hot jock just keeps sinking deeper and deeper into his predicament: the video while he gets in his morning practice (gulp), and the photos that Doc Adam now has of him in very compromising situations... talk about a sticky web! Now, Darrah... doesn't he turn out to be interesting. Heh heh. Yeah, he's going to have Markus under his thumb now. Clearly he is involved in the larger machinations taking place, especially with that reference to the "boss". But just how much control does Darrah himself have? No doubt Markie is right to worry about Doc Adam seeing those photos... I have a feeling it is going to get a little harder for our study jock to keep others from noticing that something is going on - and not just because he's going to be putting on more muscle... it might involve a bit of chrome. Anyway, thanks for another fantastic installment!
Rubber_Lover14
4/28/22, 1:28 AM
@Muscle-Flex I'm so glad you enjoyed it ^^ I was worried people weren't going to enjoy it due to its excessive length. And yeah, who knows. Darrah could be anything at this point. We'll just have to wait and see. Maybe more of the jocks are involved, or perhaps they will fall under the Docs influence thanks to our idiotic jocks actions. Honestly, I'm not sure myself. I just write whatever turns me on most in the moment. So really anything could happen. If there's anything you would like to see happen, any suggestions, ideas, or ways I could improve, please let me know. I want any future chapters to be as good as possible. So a loyal reader such as yourself giving their input would be much appreciated (If your comfortable doing so). Anyways, Have a nice day ^^ Cant wait to write chapter 5
Apr 27, 2022
4/28/22, 1:46 AM
Loved this chapter
Apr 20, 2022
4/27/22, 11:42 PM
OK you said you wanted detailed comments so you could make the next part even better, so here they are. I really enjoyed the story but here are my issues and concerns and hopefully this isn't too harsh. It was a fun story but I had to read it twice to make sure I got all the details clear. The first time through I felt like Corey more or less just took an axe to the head and had his personality wiped by Jason's musk but the 2nd time through picked up that he did enjoy giving in to Jason. However, that I had to dig to find that out means I don't think you delivered that with enough impact and clarity. Like you kind of at the last minute noted that Corey had actually been turned on the first time Jason went after him and made him start to feel submissive, but didn't tell Jason. Well, you didn't tell _the readers_ either. So the whole mental resistance breakdown and seduction could have been a little richer. Hank was a little bit clumsy both as a character and how he acted. Was Hank a predator type? Well, he didn't seem to know, which is kind of fair, but based on him simply not affecting Corey with pheromones the answer seems clearly "no" he was just a top who was left alone because he worked there. And maybe he was a little dumb or oblivious or maybe he was slightly addled by a contact buzz from all the predators. You'd think that the person who worked there would really understand everything; he also must have believed Corey would be truly safe there, or he would have warned him off. But he didn't, but then he did keep chaperoning him. So, he was telling Corey it was safe but guarding him just in case? WTF Hank? At this point, the internal logic of the story gets muddied. Hank said that in certain hours of the gym the predator/prey thing happened. Jason normally didn't work out in the "safe" hours but when he happened to be there he went after Corey, then he came back and attacked him a week later. So why are there safe hours? Is it a formal rule that someone enforces? Do the predatory guys have a pact that they're supposed to leave normies alone during the day? Is Hank simply wrong (very plausible he seems dumb) and the dangerous studs just usually work out in the evening? If there is a formal safe time shouldn't Jason answer to someone for violating it, twice even? And attacking a gym staff member? And was the mild exposure to Jason's stink enough to make Hank "get in line" at least or did he shrug it off later? And then the big question: Why is this all happening? If this story was just about Jason, Random Guy With Pheromone Powers it wouldn't be such a big deal. You could assume he's a mutant or has magic or any of a number of possible reasons. But if it's a BUNCH of guys at the same place with the same power, what is going on? Does the gym magically bestow this quality on them based on if they have top/dom personalities or some other factor? Does some Gym Master bestow pheromone powers? Are the doms mutants and they just picked a gym to use? Because what is really going on here should act as a frame or boundary for the story and it doesn't feel like you have that. It feels like you made it all up as you went along and never sussed out this background even for yourself. As a hot domination story, totally fine, but as a very analytical reader it kept taking me out of the story. Like at one point I wondered, since Corey said twice he didn't want to be a bitch, would he maybe resist? Could exposure to Jason "contaminating" him with his pheromones make him develop powers of his own? Could Corey start giving off hypnostink and perhaps claim Hank?? Nope. Still, Jason was hot. He was a little more degrading than I like (Rory was sexy pet name, Whorey not so much) but he was genuinely INTO his prey. And at the end once he formed his D/s relationship he's letting him act normal. It sounds like Corey might not even be kept totally stoned out to being a total barely there sub. So that's not too bad. The story feels like a fun, slightly scary but not horrible domination fantasy. Overall I really liked the story but from an editing background I would liked to have seen 1 more revision done on it. There were a couple lines that I think just made no sense to me and a couple that were so unclear I stopped and re-read them then moved on. So if I were your editor there would be a lot of notes on this one, all in the intent of challenging you to really knock this one out of the park.