Recent Comments

4/27/22, 1:20 PM
I have to agree with all the comments. I did not want to read this story at the start, but after the first entry, I could not wait for the next. I could almost compare the character development to that of Stephen King. I am very happy at the conclusion of the story, but also sad that it will not go on. I could easily see this as a novella, and some of the characters that got their comeuppance could be followed a bit post cunting/ whoring. Thank you so much

4/27/22, 3:20 PM
@Ricky Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. I loved creating the characters and their world. I am sad to see them go but also pleased to hear how much people enjoyed the story.
4/27/22, 3:04 PM
Loved this story, hoping for a part 3!
4/27/22, 9:01 AM
Great continuation, love the whole idea. Thanks in advance for another chapter? Pretty please!
Anonymous
4/27/22, 7:46 AM
Very fun
Anonymous
4/26/22, 8:02 PM
Loved this one so much , really like how you do the POV for example with the guy solving the tie problem, reasoning to « justify the hypnotist suggestion ». Also liked the place of the story , pretty original and you used it well Really nice job

4/27/22, 7:44 AM
Many thanks!
4/27/22, 7:39 AM
We do have similar histories..my first hypno excitement was watching Mowgli seduced by Kaa's hypnotic spiral eyes in the Jungle Book film...again it didn't make its presence known until much later, having been strengthened by various Dr Who episodes with the Master and other hypnotic tales...its an honour to be asked to share ideas with you and I'll be emailing.
4/27/22, 7:34 AM
Another terrific chapter! Interesting twists ahead I think..especially if introducing new kinks...rubber in great for hypno stories as it stimulates all the senses - the squeak noise of rubber on rubber, the sight of the black shine; that smell, the smooth touch....the descent into darkness. bring on the next episode!
4/27/22, 1:44 AM
I love this story so much words cannot express how I waited in anticipation of the next chapters. Please continue to write stories like this. The anxiety, excitement, sensuality, love, joy, anger, resentment, pain, fear, and pure sexuality was all captured so expertly. I wait in anticipation for the next series you choose to write, eager and greedy for more. You sir are AMAZING!

4/27/22, 3:10 AM
@randy7869 :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Thanks so much for the feedback. I am glad you enjoyed it as much as you did.
Apr 25, 2022
4/27/22, 2:22 AM
Great story!! As usual. You never disappoint.
4/26/22, 1:06 PM
Oh man such a hot story. I think this has to be one of my favorites if not my favorite series from you.. maybe not including the superhero ones cause im biased haha. With Keegan knowing how much Sean loves to be degraded I hope he kicks it up and then some if theres more chapters to come. Also Sean has a model for his face but does Keegan have someone that you think of when writing him? Thanks for the hot story Jack!

4/26/22, 8:19 PM
@AxelCyclone I'll add Keeg next chapter for you :)

4/27/22, 1:40 AM
@Jack Parker Awesome! You already had Logan Foote and he is so hot and a perfect Pick for who Sean could be so I've been curious at who you had in mind for Keegan. I had someone like Haydem Monteleone in mind when reading Keegan so im excited to see who you choose!