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4/26/22, 9:57 AM
I have a feeling things are going to go bad for poor Morgan. Maybe he will go to jail for mistaken identity.

4/26/22, 4:55 PM
Or possibly a young offenders prison? Depends what age they put on the form. @tanners92
4/25/22, 10:20 PM
nice work. hope daddy stays in control, or something like a hypno triangle happens. dad controls son, son gains control of mr warwick, mr warwick controls the dad, all with them not really noticing xD

4/26/22, 3:36 PM
@fleed412 Love the idea of the snake eating its own tail, a magical circle of hypnosis and control. I haven't got far with planning the next chapter but I will introduce a fourth participant and use him to potentially twist the developing relationships into a new alignment
EntrancedGay92
4/25/22, 9:06 PM
Unf, I loved hearing this story from Dad's perspective again. I especially got hard when he was recalling slipping every so slightly under Warwick's spell, I had a feeling something similar was going to happen when he was first introduced. Keep up the great work.

4/26/22, 3:33 PM
@EntrancedGay92 I've enjoyed your work, something tells me that you're a very naughty man with all those underhand inductions that I love. For me there's a powerful eroticism about a man letting down his guard and allowing himself to be taken under almost by accident and thos elements will continue into the next chapter
4/26/22, 3:24 PM
Damm that school sounds like fun now way better than mine high school anyway
4/25/22, 7:25 PM
Finally in the “read this” club. Yeah. 🤷🏼 It’s exceptional. Your attention to craft makes everything a joy for the eyes (and the mind) to follow. I loved the character dynamic. Finn’s perspective as he starts warming into the wish’s influence was ‘chef’s kiss’ dramatic-irony-done-well.

4/26/22, 2:39 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Thanks so much for reading!
4/26/22, 2:20 PM
JESUS CHRIST Nocturne!! Your usual (high) craft level, but now with a lore-gasm to boot. This is phenomenal work.

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Well thanks so much. I’m kind of thinking that this world building that I came up with is going to give it enough impetus to be about the length of a novella. I’m really looking forward to seeing what people think of the third part because I feel like now the story is starting to blend into a more clear direction.
4/8/22, 9:43 PM
This is fascinating, and very hot! I'm excited to see more of it when it's ready!

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@Dace oops I accidentally didn't reply directly to you before. Thanks much!
Anonymous
4/26/22, 11:37 AM
Could you write more with this storyline?
4/26/22, 10:30 AM
It ended exactly the way we knew it should end since Liam first told that story. And much better than subverting expectations, it set us up for the perfect ending where things just fell right where they should. Thank you for sharing! It was one of my favorites I've ever read.

4/26/22, 10:53 AM
@tomtales Thank you so much for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed the ending. The clues were there all along. ;-)
4/26/22, 10:05 AM
Still holding out for the next chapter