Recent Comments

4/25/22, 7:25 PM
Finally in the “read this” club. Yeah. 🤷🏼 It’s exceptional. Your attention to craft makes everything a joy for the eyes (and the mind) to follow. I loved the character dynamic. Finn’s perspective as he starts warming into the wish’s influence was ‘chef’s kiss’ dramatic-irony-done-well.

4/26/22, 2:39 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Thanks so much for reading!
4/26/22, 2:20 PM
JESUS CHRIST Nocturne!! Your usual (high) craft level, but now with a lore-gasm to boot. This is phenomenal work.

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Well thanks so much. I’m kind of thinking that this world building that I came up with is going to give it enough impetus to be about the length of a novella. I’m really looking forward to seeing what people think of the third part because I feel like now the story is starting to blend into a more clear direction.
4/8/22, 9:43 PM
This is fascinating, and very hot! I'm excited to see more of it when it's ready!

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@Dace oops I accidentally didn't reply directly to you before. Thanks much!
Anonymous
4/26/22, 11:37 AM
Could you write more with this storyline?
4/26/22, 10:30 AM
It ended exactly the way we knew it should end since Liam first told that story. And much better than subverting expectations, it set us up for the perfect ending where things just fell right where they should. Thank you for sharing! It was one of my favorites I've ever read.

4/26/22, 10:53 AM
@tomtales Thank you so much for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed the ending. The clues were there all along. ;-)
4/26/22, 10:05 AM
Still holding out for the next chapter
Anonymous
4/26/22, 8:47 AM
This is a great story, can't wait to see what happens next!
4/25/22, 4:58 PM
Holy hell, doing the story again from Master's point of view was a stroke of inspiration, let alone making our seeming stooge Mr Warwick into something of a villain at the same time. This is fucking fantastic, you set up plot in the previous chapters without us even noticing too. Not to mention-hot. as. all. hell

4/26/22, 7:17 AM
@HypnoticPrey thanks for your kind words. My hypno-kink usually develops from an unconscious induction where the subject doesn't know what's going to happen to him next, willingly participates and (misguidedly) puts his trust in the hypnotist. In a sense, if you didn't see the plot twist coming, then I'm using the same technique on you - getting you to trust the author and then playing with your expectations. Hope you continue to enjoy the series!
4/26/22, 7:16 AM
Good Plot . Cut his Hair and give ihm Tattoos and piercings to Go with the look
4/22/22, 4:17 PM
Thoroughly enjoying the latest part and hungry for more! I'm with those waiting to see how dark Mr Warwick gets and whether or not he is being controlled by Daddy.. not forgetting the other potential subjects that might get involved..as well as darker kinks..mmmm

4/23/22, 9:10 AM
@DriftingScot Hey more kind comments I'm glad you're still with me. Next instalment is 30% drafted, hope it continues to pique your interest

4/25/22, 8:40 AM
@Whitechap_e1 Great news that you are well on with the next installment. Long been a follower of you and enjoyed your writing and ideas. Thinking about the way different people seem to have different hypno fetish reactions...some are turned on by the act of hypnosis/being hypnotised and love the idea of being put under by a friend or friendly tist who helps them acheive something or to enjoy more sex but others get more excited about what the hypnotised become...having been a horny teen in the 70s being turned on by hypno stories in superhero comics I'm a sucker for the evil villain brainwashing and reprogramming tale! Ordinary guys being turned into rubberised drones or smoking skins or whatever else their Masters require is my thing.

4/26/22, 7:00 AM
@DriftingScot Sounds like we are kindred spirits. My introduction to hypno-fetish happened before I was even aware of my sexuality. Aged 7, om holiday in France, it was a rainy day and my mum took us off to a second hand bookshop with a pile of comic books. My selection, completely at random, was an old Tintin book, 'Vol 714 a Sydney'. And it was all there, no female characters, drugs, hypnosis and a group of men in tight trousers, fetishistic clothing and facial hair - it had a powerful effect on my juvenile mind but it took me ten years to understand the subtext, and by then I was trapped. I've still got the book, in fact it's the only thing I've still got from my childhood, such is its power over me. Kinky people, the French, all that wrapped up as childrens entertainment. Hey, I've put up chapter three and am starting on chapter four, I'd appreciate bouncing ideas off someone, my email address is at the top of the story contact me if you'd like to help me.