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EntrancedGay92
4/25/22, 9:06 PM
Unf, I loved hearing this story from Dad's perspective again. I especially got hard when he was recalling slipping every so slightly under Warwick's spell, I had a feeling something similar was going to happen when he was first introduced. Keep up the great work.

4/26/22, 3:33 PM
@EntrancedGay92 I've enjoyed your work, something tells me that you're a very naughty man with all those underhand inductions that I love. For me there's a powerful eroticism about a man letting down his guard and allowing himself to be taken under almost by accident and thos elements will continue into the next chapter
4/26/22, 3:24 PM
Damm that school sounds like fun now way better than mine high school anyway
4/25/22, 7:25 PM
Finally in the “read this” club. Yeah. 🤷🏼 It’s exceptional. Your attention to craft makes everything a joy for the eyes (and the mind) to follow. I loved the character dynamic. Finn’s perspective as he starts warming into the wish’s influence was ‘chef’s kiss’ dramatic-irony-done-well.

4/26/22, 2:39 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Thanks so much for reading!
4/26/22, 2:20 PM
JESUS CHRIST Nocturne!! Your usual (high) craft level, but now with a lore-gasm to boot. This is phenomenal work.

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Well thanks so much. I’m kind of thinking that this world building that I came up with is going to give it enough impetus to be about the length of a novella. I’m really looking forward to seeing what people think of the third part because I feel like now the story is starting to blend into a more clear direction.
4/8/22, 9:43 PM
This is fascinating, and very hot! I'm excited to see more of it when it's ready!

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@Dace oops I accidentally didn't reply directly to you before. Thanks much!
Anonymous
4/26/22, 11:37 AM
Could you write more with this storyline?
4/26/22, 10:30 AM
It ended exactly the way we knew it should end since Liam first told that story. And much better than subverting expectations, it set us up for the perfect ending where things just fell right where they should. Thank you for sharing! It was one of my favorites I've ever read.

4/26/22, 10:53 AM
@tomtales Thank you so much for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed the ending. The clues were there all along. ;-)
4/26/22, 10:05 AM
Still holding out for the next chapter
Anonymous
4/26/22, 8:47 AM
This is a great story, can't wait to see what happens next!
4/25/22, 4:58 PM
Holy hell, doing the story again from Master's point of view was a stroke of inspiration, let alone making our seeming stooge Mr Warwick into something of a villain at the same time. This is fucking fantastic, you set up plot in the previous chapters without us even noticing too. Not to mention-hot. as. all. hell

4/26/22, 7:17 AM
@HypnoticPrey thanks for your kind words. My hypno-kink usually develops from an unconscious induction where the subject doesn't know what's going to happen to him next, willingly participates and (misguidedly) puts his trust in the hypnotist. In a sense, if you didn't see the plot twist coming, then I'm using the same technique on you - getting you to trust the author and then playing with your expectations. Hope you continue to enjoy the series!