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4/26/22, 10:05 AM
Still holding out for the next chapter
Anonymous
4/26/22, 8:47 AM
This is a great story, can't wait to see what happens next!
4/25/22, 4:58 PM
Holy hell, doing the story again from Master's point of view was a stroke of inspiration, let alone making our seeming stooge Mr Warwick into something of a villain at the same time. This is fucking fantastic, you set up plot in the previous chapters without us even noticing too. Not to mention-hot. as. all. hell

4/26/22, 7:17 AM
@HypnoticPrey thanks for your kind words. My hypno-kink usually develops from an unconscious induction where the subject doesn't know what's going to happen to him next, willingly participates and (misguidedly) puts his trust in the hypnotist. In a sense, if you didn't see the plot twist coming, then I'm using the same technique on you - getting you to trust the author and then playing with your expectations. Hope you continue to enjoy the series!
4/26/22, 7:16 AM
Good Plot . Cut his Hair and give ihm Tattoos and piercings to Go with the look
4/22/22, 4:17 PM
Thoroughly enjoying the latest part and hungry for more! I'm with those waiting to see how dark Mr Warwick gets and whether or not he is being controlled by Daddy.. not forgetting the other potential subjects that might get involved..as well as darker kinks..mmmm

4/23/22, 9:10 AM
@DriftingScot Hey more kind comments I'm glad you're still with me. Next instalment is 30% drafted, hope it continues to pique your interest

4/25/22, 8:40 AM
@Whitechap_e1 Great news that you are well on with the next installment. Long been a follower of you and enjoyed your writing and ideas. Thinking about the way different people seem to have different hypno fetish reactions...some are turned on by the act of hypnosis/being hypnotised and love the idea of being put under by a friend or friendly tist who helps them acheive something or to enjoy more sex but others get more excited about what the hypnotised become...having been a horny teen in the 70s being turned on by hypno stories in superhero comics I'm a sucker for the evil villain brainwashing and reprogramming tale! Ordinary guys being turned into rubberised drones or smoking skins or whatever else their Masters require is my thing.

4/26/22, 7:00 AM
@DriftingScot Sounds like we are kindred spirits. My introduction to hypno-fetish happened before I was even aware of my sexuality. Aged 7, om holiday in France, it was a rainy day and my mum took us off to a second hand bookshop with a pile of comic books. My selection, completely at random, was an old Tintin book, 'Vol 714 a Sydney'. And it was all there, no female characters, drugs, hypnosis and a group of men in tight trousers, fetishistic clothing and facial hair - it had a powerful effect on my juvenile mind but it took me ten years to understand the subtext, and by then I was trapped. I've still got the book, in fact it's the only thing I've still got from my childhood, such is its power over me. Kinky people, the French, all that wrapped up as childrens entertainment. Hey, I've put up chapter three and am starting on chapter four, I'd appreciate bouncing ideas off someone, my email address is at the top of the story contact me if you'd like to help me.
Anonymous
4/26/22, 5:19 AM
a wonderful slow burn…
Anonymous
4/26/22, 4:55 AM
well… that was hot!!!
Will Ryder
4/26/22, 4:18 AM
Another gr8 chapter 📖😁📖 I 💖 how Scott ensnared his older bear brother Colin ✨🐻✨ And the interaction between the Alpha🐻Bear & Scott as they spit roasted Colin was H🥵T as F**K! I also loved how Daddy🐻Bear put his 2 Cubs 2 bed 💤🐻💞🐻💤 Can't wait 2 read how Peter & Rhett are added 2 The🐻Den.
rwriter51
4/26/22, 4:11 AM
Too bad this hasn't continued. It's a unique and sexy story.
4/25/22, 5:49 AM
Whoo. Now, I'll keep it brief, to not spoil anything. But, yes, I love this. It's everything I was really hoping would happen. Down to the epilogue at the very end. Thank you, truly. Definitely one of the best reads on this site, and I'm glad things went as they did. Hard to stomach for half of it, but these last two chunks were just great.

4/25/22, 9:48 AM
@Lancelot Whoo indeed. I know you struggled a little along the way. Comments like this make the whole process worthwhile. So pleased you enjoyed the end. And thanks for not spoiling anything.

4/25/22, 7:49 PM
@Speedychopslover I only have two further remarks. One, questioning if this is a typo. "Right now Liam is probably the luckiest man in all Albion." I'd imagine that more relates to Avon than Albion at the moment. And, two, if you do a follow-up at all, maybe shorter vignette-type things for some side characters, maybe some follow-up regarding running water and our dear main himbo's father. Since it's the sorta thing that's referenced a few times in the story, I thought it'd play a role. Kinda glad not, but still wondering what those nudges were for.

4/26/22, 3:02 AM
@Lancelot LOL - It may well be a typo. We tried to weed out as many as possible. I gave Lloyd a monumental task with my writing, but as good as he is I am sure there are more than a few. I may go back an correct that one though. As for any kind of follow up I doubt it would be some time before I returned to this world or these characters. I personally doubt I would use the Albion setting for vignette stories. Albion is a really brutal place and I think you would loose some of the balance in a vignette.

4/26/22, 3:30 AM
@Speedychopslover Yeah, that's fair. It's just pretty rare on a site like this to actually latch onto the characters and want to see more of them. I can think of maybe three other stories with that sort of hook for me. And, while we got a nice wrap-up for some, there's still so many more who are kinda left in the abyss. Understandably so, given how massive this story already is, but still the sort of thing one wonders about.

4/26/22, 4:08 AM
@Lancelot Well I am glad the characters resonated and thank you for saying so. I have appreicated your engagement and comments as the story progressed. As for the characters I loved writing them. I am not so protective though that I wouldn't be happy to see other people develop stories in this world or use these characters. I have no real problems seeing people take this idea forward, backwards, maybe even sidewards. I do have a fairly clear outline on how I would return to the story and where it would end but for now I am happy to leave this world.