Recent Comments

rwriter51
4/26/22, 4:11 AM
Too bad this hasn't continued. It's a unique and sexy story.
4/25/22, 5:49 AM
Whoo. Now, I'll keep it brief, to not spoil anything. But, yes, I love this. It's everything I was really hoping would happen. Down to the epilogue at the very end. Thank you, truly. Definitely one of the best reads on this site, and I'm glad things went as they did. Hard to stomach for half of it, but these last two chunks were just great.

4/25/22, 9:48 AM
@Lancelot Whoo indeed. I know you struggled a little along the way. Comments like this make the whole process worthwhile. So pleased you enjoyed the end. And thanks for not spoiling anything.

4/25/22, 7:49 PM
@Speedychopslover I only have two further remarks. One, questioning if this is a typo. "Right now Liam is probably the luckiest man in all Albion." I'd imagine that more relates to Avon than Albion at the moment. And, two, if you do a follow-up at all, maybe shorter vignette-type things for some side characters, maybe some follow-up regarding running water and our dear main himbo's father. Since it's the sorta thing that's referenced a few times in the story, I thought it'd play a role. Kinda glad not, but still wondering what those nudges were for.

4/26/22, 3:02 AM
@Lancelot LOL - It may well be a typo. We tried to weed out as many as possible. I gave Lloyd a monumental task with my writing, but as good as he is I am sure there are more than a few. I may go back an correct that one though. As for any kind of follow up I doubt it would be some time before I returned to this world or these characters. I personally doubt I would use the Albion setting for vignette stories. Albion is a really brutal place and I think you would loose some of the balance in a vignette.

4/26/22, 3:30 AM
@Speedychopslover Yeah, that's fair. It's just pretty rare on a site like this to actually latch onto the characters and want to see more of them. I can think of maybe three other stories with that sort of hook for me. And, while we got a nice wrap-up for some, there's still so many more who are kinda left in the abyss. Understandably so, given how massive this story already is, but still the sort of thing one wonders about.

4/26/22, 4:08 AM
@Lancelot Well I am glad the characters resonated and thank you for saying so. I have appreicated your engagement and comments as the story progressed. As for the characters I loved writing them. I am not so protective though that I wouldn't be happy to see other people develop stories in this world or use these characters. I have no real problems seeing people take this idea forward, backwards, maybe even sidewards. I do have a fairly clear outline on how I would return to the story and where it would end but for now I am happy to leave this world.
Apr 25, 2022
Anonymous
4/26/22, 4:06 AM
v hot story for the main characters… with delightful glimpses into the chorus… keep up the great writing…
Will Ryder
4/25/22, 5:25 PM
That was a 🌟BRILLIANT🌟 series. I feel sorry 4 Sam, but at least he's now with his Dad 🤖💞🤖 I understand Alan & his Father wanting 2 keep the secret of where the Bots cum from: ✨🤖👨🤖👨🤖✨ And I 💖 horn-dog Alan spinning the situation 2 his advantage 🍌😘🍌

4/26/22, 12:47 AM
@Will Ryder Thanks for commenting on the story. I haven't thought of this one in a while. It appears that I wrote this nearly 4 years ago to the day. What I do remember was the inspiration the story come from an episode of HBO's Westworld. In one of the scenes, they began discussing the concept of a "Judas Steer" and suddenly my imagination started to churn. I imagined a man that would entrap other men in the same predicament that he was in. Again, I'm glad that other guys enjoy what my pervy imagination conjures up. Thanks for the comments.

Will Ryder
4/26/22, 3:23 AM
@rubbrsome You have an 🌟AMAZING🌟 imagination👍 And a brilliant sense of humor & empathy 4 your character's 😂😘😢 Keep up the good work 👍😁👍
Will Ryder
4/26/22, 3:10 AM
❗DANG❗ Colins conversion was one 🔥H🥵T🔥 read 📖😘📖 I agree with Kyle - it was brilliant the Alpha🐻Bear was just playing with Colin, knowing all too well he had already lost the game. And that final burst of resistance from Colin was a nice surprise 😲 I'm hoping Scott can help Colin 2 finally see ✨The💡Light✨
4/25/22, 2:35 PM
This was an awesome story. I loved how open Brett and Liam were to exploring different sexual desires. I think a few minor tweaks the could be a novel. If you wanted that is.

4/26/22, 2:46 AM
@gaygeek Thanks and glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for the comment. Much appreciated.
Apr 25, 2022
Anonymous
4/26/22, 1:52 AM
Very nice! I hate that my mind can't ignore the fact that there is no explanation for the lack of women in this scenario. Why can't I just be happy that they weren't involved?!
Feb 19, 2019
4/26/22, 1:33 AM
I can never get enough of this story. It is one of my guilty pleasures. I have to say that I would love to read the script from "Weekend at Papa Hog's Farm" I'm a little too old to audition for the frat boy roles but maybe the sequel would have an older brother looking for his missing kid brother on Papa Hog's Farm. 😉 I love your work mcbaer.
4/26/22, 1:21 AM
So good …

4/26/22, 1:26 AM
@Beaner Thanks man!
4/26/22, 1:03 AM
still hoping for part 3