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4/26/22, 3:14 PM
With Max now fully canine except for his memory of his past as a human and his determination to exact revenge on Xander, I had expected that his friendship with Hugh to lead to something more but clearly you have other ideas. I'm looking forward to your next chapters.

4/26/22, 10:09 PM
@Donoevil If you mean the two dogs having sex.. it's not something I'm into so I won't be writing about that sorry (no judgement if that's what you're into)! Thanks for the comment, glad to have you. :)
4/25/22, 11:33 AM
I’m in with a sex scene , you have a great imagination

4/26/22, 10:07 PM
@Bimarguy Aww thank you!
4/25/22, 6:03 PM
Will this one continue?

4/26/22, 8:09 PM
@darkblade2814 Yes, I'm working on the third chapter.

4/26/22, 8:25 PM
@astrolub I'm gald to hear, I hope it goes well
4/26/22, 9:57 AM
I have a feeling things are going to go bad for poor Morgan. Maybe he will go to jail for mistaken identity.

4/26/22, 4:55 PM
Or possibly a young offenders prison? Depends what age they put on the form. @tanners92
4/25/22, 10:20 PM
nice work. hope daddy stays in control, or something like a hypno triangle happens. dad controls son, son gains control of mr warwick, mr warwick controls the dad, all with them not really noticing xD

4/26/22, 3:36 PM
@fleed412 Love the idea of the snake eating its own tail, a magical circle of hypnosis and control. I haven't got far with planning the next chapter but I will introduce a fourth participant and use him to potentially twist the developing relationships into a new alignment
EntrancedGay92
4/25/22, 9:06 PM
Unf, I loved hearing this story from Dad's perspective again. I especially got hard when he was recalling slipping every so slightly under Warwick's spell, I had a feeling something similar was going to happen when he was first introduced. Keep up the great work.

4/26/22, 3:33 PM
@EntrancedGay92 I've enjoyed your work, something tells me that you're a very naughty man with all those underhand inductions that I love. For me there's a powerful eroticism about a man letting down his guard and allowing himself to be taken under almost by accident and thos elements will continue into the next chapter
4/26/22, 3:24 PM
Damm that school sounds like fun now way better than mine high school anyway
4/25/22, 7:25 PM
Finally in the “read this” club. Yeah. 🤷🏼 It’s exceptional. Your attention to craft makes everything a joy for the eyes (and the mind) to follow. I loved the character dynamic. Finn’s perspective as he starts warming into the wish’s influence was ‘chef’s kiss’ dramatic-irony-done-well.

4/26/22, 2:39 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Thanks so much for reading!
4/26/22, 2:20 PM
JESUS CHRIST Nocturne!! Your usual (high) craft level, but now with a lore-gasm to boot. This is phenomenal work.

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Well thanks so much. I’m kind of thinking that this world building that I came up with is going to give it enough impetus to be about the length of a novella. I’m really looking forward to seeing what people think of the third part because I feel like now the story is starting to blend into a more clear direction.
4/8/22, 9:43 PM
This is fascinating, and very hot! I'm excited to see more of it when it's ready!

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@Dace oops I accidentally didn't reply directly to you before. Thanks much!