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3/23/25, 4:44 AM
Almost magical -- but then this story hits a lot of my kinky buttons!! I loved the use of extensive hypnosis, deeply embedded triggers, and enslaved friends to control the protagonist's behavior and augment his training. I love that the protagonist remains so unaware for so long, and even then discovers his situation only very slowly as he denies it over and over. I really want to find that same motivation to work out, and later have a friend to try that 'Submit' trigger on me! I feel a curiously powerful need to experience "ecstatic obedience and subservience", and the orgasmic pleasure of losing my will to such a powerful Master.
3/23/25, 4:32 AM
Soooo good! Well worth the wait; I tried holding off a few days to see if there were another chapter coming, because I hate the thought that I've read them all (about four times!) Really earger to see how John and Mark reinforce each other's obedience to the Cock Master, and to learn what his plans are for them. Hope it's almost total domination and that he forces them to do all sorts of things together that they both abhor and relish at the same time. Thank you for wonderful new chapter and I hope that--when you're ready and eager--more will be coming. You're such a great writer.
PupBama
3/23/25, 3:25 AM
Hot story! Can't wait to hear what's happening in that factory
3/23/25, 12:05 AM
How at ease it must feel to be simple and obedient. Just like Brad. Just gotta listen and obey. And become a complete muscle slut while he is at it. Really enjoy the growing control Vale has over him. The twist with getting milk/protein from the source was a wonderful twist. And then locking his 'udder' too until needed. Keeps him focused on where it needs to be: Vale. And put all that bottled up 'milk' and testosterone to greater use too. Oh, and I am going to so enjoy what Vale does to him next chapter! All that heightened sensitivity with that cage in place. He will be so lost in pleasure and obedience. And if Vale can get Ryan back like it seems, then his twin hunky boys are not far behind. Those two will fall like a sack of potatoes. I bet Vale will use Brad to get control over them.
3/19/25, 10:56 AM
Damn, this storyline is HOT AS FUCK! 🤤 Hoping to maybe see a part 2 to it 👀

3/22/25, 11:49 PM
@[Miitshii](/user/show/801085) I never say never!
3/22/25, 10:23 PM
I was worried you'd not continue this one. Thrilled that you have!
3/22/25, 8:06 PM
Great job! How do I share story ideas?

3/22/25, 10:14 PM
@[Mr T](/user/show/18018) You should be able to PM me via GSS or my email is in my bio. Always happy to chat with fans! :)
asfrmaster
3/22/25, 10:05 PM
this is truly one of the best freeze stories I have ever read. do you take commissions?
3/22/25, 9:49 PM
Loving this!
3/22/25, 2:20 PM
Baron Zemo is going to take good care of Spider-Man. I can hardly wait.

3/22/25, 9:47 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Oh he will take GOOD care of Peter.