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3/22/25, 9:49 PM
Loving this!
3/22/25, 2:20 PM
Baron Zemo is going to take good care of Spider-Man. I can hardly wait.

3/22/25, 9:47 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Oh he will take GOOD care of Peter.
3/22/25, 4:47 PM
Zemo? That's a rare character to see; especially in fan fiction. No doubt rescuing the hero, but just to have his own control over him. But how he does it will be very exciting to see.

3/22/25, 9:47 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I am trying to keep it MCU adjacent and am moving to Captain America soon so he felt like the best pivot I could use.
3/22/25, 8:14 PM
I'm alive. It's been a while since I posted this story and for a long time I didn't know exactly how to continue it, but I managed to come up with something I liked, and I hope you like it too. Let's hope this chapter doesn't have such a glaring error as the last one (8” wide) hahaha. But to be honest, I haven't corrected and edited this chapter that thoroughly, so if you notice any mistakes, feel free to comment and I'll correct them at some point. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it. And I should probably write at least one more chapter for this story to finish it off the way I envisioned, so stay tuned. I'll try not to take months to post this time hahaha.
Satyroom
3/21/25, 11:21 PM
Love your writing! I'm looking for a writer for some of my game. Paid job. You can DM me at https://x.com/satyroom or on bluesky at @satyroom.bsky.social Interesting to see more of your work in general :^)

3/22/25, 5:09 PM
@Satyroom Thank you! I just DM’d you on X/Twitter/whatever.
Rob
3/22/25, 3:30 PM
So hot !!! Loved how it took revenge against onlyfans people who scam others and this was by far one of the more unique angles to depict hot sexy foot worship in such a naughty way 😈 I have friends who find hypnosis to be very sexy too and I love how you weave it into the narrative here. You write excellently and paint a vivid picture with all your details. 5 out of 5!! Would love to see a porn of this
3/22/25, 12:59 PM
I'm always up for a good stink story. It's rare that one centers on it like this one does. Writing is direct and crisp. I would have liked if there was more description of the increasing odors, other than just mentioning them. For example . . . HOW one guys musk differs from another. Kind of lost the scent in part two.
3/22/25, 12:40 PM
WOW! The way that you describe things is so exciting... erotic. THANKYOU. That was FUN.
3/22/25, 12:01 PM
And now Helmut Zemo to the rescue or for further abuse? Either way, you make it a great story. Thank you, Jack.
3/22/25, 11:55 AM
Been a while since I've read such a well built story. Thanks for writing and I hope you can keep going