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Apr 25, 2022
4/25/22, 1:26 AM
Really hot story. I love a good mass-enslavement story. I hope you make another chapter where slave M30176 helps Steven out.
4/24/22, 5:32 AM
This story continues to be such a romp! All the different scenarios that have emerged so far are such good fun! You write with such humour. Also, you can really see Gabe's care and awareness coming through in the end of this chapter, and it's very sweet. His support of Sam is delightful to see.

4/25/22, 12:00 AM
@time.to.occur Thanks! I've never been much of a serious writer (other than my terrible maudlin poems from college). This story was always going to be a lighthearted and a bit silly, but the emotional components were an unexpected turn as the initial idea got away from me and turned into a novelette instead of a short story! I'm glad people are enjoying those bits along with the jokes and smut.
4/24/22, 3:59 AM
Well, damn. I've been eagerly awaiting this story's continuation, and it does NOT disappoint. There's a bit of everything in this chapter. Hot sex, cuddling, touching moments, and intrigue. I love Sam and I want him to accept that not being straight isn't a bad thing, or to explore that particular hang-up a bit more so that he and Gabe or he and Marc, or hell, all three of them, can be together without the lingering issues. But digging into that might not be where you intend to go. Either way, I'm in for the ride. Looking forward to seeing how the rest of this plays out and what will happen with Professor Hunt and the black coats.

4/24/22, 11:55 PM
@Proteus Thanks! It was a bit of a ride getting all the parts to play nicely. There's definitely a happy ending planned for the three guys!
4/23/22, 7:40 PM
The bi self-denial is almost too real

4/24/22, 11:54 PM
@Bbclover97 Psh. Bi? Sam is the straightest guy on campus :wink:
4/24/22, 11:18 PM
OK, so everyone knows how much I love what Jack has done with this story. In my wildest dreams I had never imagined he would make it so good. But let me tell you, he's just run the next chapter by me for edits and comments as the commissioner of this series and Holy Sh*tballs Batman, he has taken what was going to be a pretty basic chapter to move the plot forward and he has delivered the most amazing chapter yet. Get excited guys cause the next chapter is dropping soon.
Will Ryder
4/24/22, 8:58 PM
Uh-oh 😯 I wonder what Chief Cushing has in mind 4 our young hero 🍌😘🍌 Superboy under the influence of Pink🧡K is a Super-Slut lol! 🤣🥵🥰 I can't help but "see" Clark Kent from the old Smallville series when I'm reading this 📖🤓📖 Another horny lil chapter👍
4/24/22, 6:15 PM
Good story, excellently written.
musclejunkie
4/14/22, 12:39 PM
It's so good! I have stayed up super late reading through this story completely lost in it and envisioning every scene in my mind. Absolutely great work. Please don't let it end now because things have really just gotten juicier than Bretts cunt.

4/24/22, 5:50 PM
@musclejunkie The last part is on its way. I just put in for publication. Hope you enjoy the final part.
Brian
4/13/22, 2:49 AM
This might be the best story on this whole site. I have loved every single chapter. It's such a cool premise, and you've constructed the world so well. I can't wait to see how it ends. The only thing that would make this even better is if we had some illustrations to show the physical changes to the character. And it would be great to have a voice recording of a character's voice changing. I'd love to see what the characters looked like at the start and what they look and sound like now.

4/24/22, 5:49 PM
@Brian Thanks glad you enjoy the story. I have done pictures on stories in the past. I did a whole story using about 100 images of Devin Franco on my blog. The story is terrible (well the writing) and the images drove the story. It is called Devin's Journey.
John
4/24/22, 5:31 PM
could have done without the het stuff but damn I love the way you write otherwise lol.