Recent Comments

4/19/22, 12:03 PM
I liked this a lot and I wish to know where it goes too. Will Noah be released from all fours ? Will he obey Alex unknowingly or knowingly ? Will Noah ever know who took his cherry ? Will Alex move into Noah's house and control all of his money (from the shadow) ? And so on.

Rubber_Lover14
4/24/22, 2:39 PM
@NephilimIts great to see that your already thinking of different ways this could go. Unfortunately, this will be a side project that ill probably only work on when I'm not currently working on my main series. However, I will try and bring more of the bondage aspects into A Jocks Karma. But that doesn't mean this series is over. After these responses, ill most definitely make a part two.
EntrancedGay92
4/24/22, 1:59 PM
Good to see you back around, Willie! As always, you hit all my buttons perfectly. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Anonymous
4/24/22, 3:08 AM
Nice introduction to the brofication!! Looking forward to seeing the protagonist becoming a football jock. It would be great if he was aware of the whole jockification scheme that the college has and resisted the change with his freshman friends; he was destroyed earlier and joined his bros to complete others’ transformation. In any direction, I’m thrilled to wait the next post!!

Alex Lat
4/24/22, 11:14 AM
Hi thanks for the comment. Right now I doing a edge challenge IRL so I’m writhing fast af. I can say right now that one of the friend will resist, and about the jockification don’t worry because soon chapter 2 is dropping, but don’t expect dumb down cuz I not like that
Jun 10, 2018
4/24/22, 10:50 AM
I really enjoyed this story, lots of potential and a great concept.
4/24/22, 6:52 AM
Hmmmmmmm...I like that Preston fella
Anonymous
4/24/22, 6:44 AM
Can’t wait to see Nick being buffed, focused on football, flexing and f**king !!
spiralthiago
2/7/22, 10:51 PM
more please more ..hot very hot🔥🔥🔥i am mormon gay

Cheesy
4/24/22, 5:52 AM
@spiralthiago nice to know I'm not the only one, XD
Cheesy
4/24/22, 5:50 AM
Hi, I'm actually member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints and I just wanted to say I really liked your story ^^ I probably shouldn't be on here but... I got horny, I'll feel guilty about it later 🤷 Anyways thanks for the story, it was really hot
10/26/20, 7:16 AM
Posting a comment in hopes that some people will actually read this story now that they know it's by me. (So far, it's only had about 1/3 of the views my stories normally get). But I guess that's what I get when I decide to write a story based on a stupid pun. The whole set-up for this story is based on Katherine Anne Porter's classic novella "Pale Horse, Pale Rider," one of the most famous literary works set during the 1919 Spanish flu pandemic. (The Adam Barclay character is lifted pretty directly from that story). Once I decided to change "Pale Horse" to "Pale Whores," I had to figure out what would be turning men into whores, and that's when I came up with the whole mind-controlling silent movie idea. The movie, of course, is riffing on Rudolf Valentino's breakthrough role in The Sheik (even though that came out in 1921). It's a bit of an odd story--and my first foray into historical fiction--but I'm glad that at least a few people enjoyed it.

Cheesy
4/24/22, 4:53 AM
@Hypnothrill just wanna say, I got the pun before clicking on the story and it made me chuckle. Also this is really good! I don't know why but I think I like hypnosis through screens the best and you wrote it really well!
4/24/22, 4:50 AM
Very, very hot chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this continues!