Recent Comments

Brian
4/13/22, 2:49 AM
This might be the best story on this whole site. I have loved every single chapter. It's such a cool premise, and you've constructed the world so well. I can't wait to see how it ends. The only thing that would make this even better is if we had some illustrations to show the physical changes to the character. And it would be great to have a voice recording of a character's voice changing. I'd love to see what the characters looked like at the start and what they look and sound like now.

4/24/22, 5:49 PM
@Brian Thanks glad you enjoy the story. I have done pictures on stories in the past. I did a whole story using about 100 images of Devin Franco on my blog. The story is terrible (well the writing) and the images drove the story. It is called Devin's Journey.
John
4/24/22, 5:31 PM
could have done without the het stuff but damn I love the way you write otherwise lol.
4/24/22, 5:11 PM
Oh crap! That was incredible.
4/23/22, 5:39 PM
Please keep going!

Rub.berized
4/24/22, 3:33 PM
@Marik29 I'll definitely continue to do so
Anonymous
4/24/22, 3:12 PM
This transformation hit everything I’m into, big muscle man, short dick, huge balls. Perfect 👍🏼
4/24/22, 3:10 PM
now that max is out and ready to spill the beans what possibly could go wrong lol,
LeatherBoy
4/17/22, 11:26 PM
OMG this is defintely one of my favourite stories here! i really enjoyed both your writing style and the story, which is sexy af! I really hope you will continue with this and make it a series: i'd love to see how this s/m relation devellopes, also which other fetishes could be included! You got my complete support, also dont worry about texting me if you wanna talk or you need something :)

Rubber_Lover14
4/24/22, 2:42 PM
@LeatherBoy I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this little side story of mine. I'll try and make a part two at some point. However, this is a side story, so it make take me some time. Although, I may start including bondage elements into my main story, if I find the right place for them. The next part of A Jocks Karma should be out within a week, so at least you'll have that to look forward to. And I might take you up on that offer to chat. I have plenty of free time, so just message away ^^
4/19/22, 12:03 PM
I liked this a lot and I wish to know where it goes too. Will Noah be released from all fours ? Will he obey Alex unknowingly or knowingly ? Will Noah ever know who took his cherry ? Will Alex move into Noah's house and control all of his money (from the shadow) ? And so on.

Rubber_Lover14
4/24/22, 2:39 PM
@NephilimIts great to see that your already thinking of different ways this could go. Unfortunately, this will be a side project that ill probably only work on when I'm not currently working on my main series. However, I will try and bring more of the bondage aspects into A Jocks Karma. But that doesn't mean this series is over. After these responses, ill most definitely make a part two.
EntrancedGay92
4/24/22, 1:59 PM
Good to see you back around, Willie! As always, you hit all my buttons perfectly. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Anonymous
4/24/22, 3:08 AM
Nice introduction to the brofication!! Looking forward to seeing the protagonist becoming a football jock. It would be great if he was aware of the whole jockification scheme that the college has and resisted the change with his freshman friends; he was destroyed earlier and joined his bros to complete others’ transformation. In any direction, I’m thrilled to wait the next post!!

Alex Lat
4/24/22, 11:14 AM
Hi thanks for the comment. Right now I doing a edge challenge IRL so I’m writhing fast af. I can say right now that one of the friend will resist, and about the jockification don’t worry because soon chapter 2 is dropping, but don’t expect dumb down cuz I not like that