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Jun 10, 2018
4/24/22, 10:50 AM
I really enjoyed this story, lots of potential and a great concept.
4/24/22, 6:52 AM
Hmmmmmmm...I like that Preston fella
Anonymous
4/24/22, 6:44 AM
Can’t wait to see Nick being buffed, focused on football, flexing and f**king !!
spiralthiago
2/7/22, 10:51 PM
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Cheesy
4/24/22, 5:52 AM
@spiralthiago nice to know I'm not the only one, XD
Cheesy
4/24/22, 5:50 AM
Hi, I'm actually member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints and I just wanted to say I really liked your story ^^ I probably shouldn't be on here but... I got horny, I'll feel guilty about it later 🤷 Anyways thanks for the story, it was really hot
10/26/20, 7:16 AM
Posting a comment in hopes that some people will actually read this story now that they know it's by me. (So far, it's only had about 1/3 of the views my stories normally get). But I guess that's what I get when I decide to write a story based on a stupid pun. The whole set-up for this story is based on Katherine Anne Porter's classic novella "Pale Horse, Pale Rider," one of the most famous literary works set during the 1919 Spanish flu pandemic. (The Adam Barclay character is lifted pretty directly from that story). Once I decided to change "Pale Horse" to "Pale Whores," I had to figure out what would be turning men into whores, and that's when I came up with the whole mind-controlling silent movie idea. The movie, of course, is riffing on Rudolf Valentino's breakthrough role in The Sheik (even though that came out in 1921). It's a bit of an odd story--and my first foray into historical fiction--but I'm glad that at least a few people enjoyed it.

Cheesy
4/24/22, 4:53 AM
@Hypnothrill just wanna say, I got the pun before clicking on the story and it made me chuckle. Also this is really good! I don't know why but I think I like hypnosis through screens the best and you wrote it really well!
4/24/22, 4:50 AM
Very, very hot chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this continues!
4/24/22, 4:39 AM
Come back pleaseee I begging you😭😭😭
4/24/22, 4:31 AM
I don't think I knew this was you the first time I read this story. I'm so glad you posted it here, along with your backlist!
nycboot
4/24/22, 4:05 AM
Having reading GSS now for many years, I always grin when an author finds words to express penis and genitals. In your case it's a nice 1950s term "johnson." Agree with Absman that the dog is an unnecessary distraction (and everyone's empathy goes with the dog). Nice to see all the elements that you added when compared to Absman's original. Very nice. :)