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SlutForHypno
4/21/22, 4:05 AM
This one was a bit tough to write but it was fun none the less. Lemme know if you guys like the genderbending because I can add a few Disney Princesses to the list such as Jasmine, Ariel, Aurora, and Cinderella. Also as I said in the Author's notes, Do lemme know if I fucked up somewhere on Kai's gender. I don't want anybody feeling uncomfortable when reading my smut haha. Out side of that Thoughts and Critiques always appreciated. Next two Should be pretty obvious so if you are one of the people asking for them, congrats and sorry it took so long haha. Other than that, im debating whether or not to open this up to anime characters after a few more chapters, or just making this a KH universe story and then starting another Type harem series with anime characters in general and a knew hypnotist of sorts. Im not sure which but either can roll with me. I just need a good character to start with is all haha.

4/22/22, 5:30 AM
@SlutForHypno I dont read much Trans stories or at all so ill let someone else confirm that part other than me thinking it was done well. Excited to see the next chapter though! With Kaa having two himbo tops im crossing my finger Hercules is the Himbo bottom and Aladdin is a top. For your other universe stories it sounds like a cool idea for it to be someone else that would start their own harem in that genre but Im here for the ride so anything you decide ill be here to read haha. Thanks for another hot chapter!

SlutForHypno
4/23/22, 5:11 AM
@AxelCyclone Thanks for the input. I'm glad you like it. As I said, I am very much open to criticism if I overstepped my bounds here. As someone who has occasionally questioned his gender, I thought it would be an interesting to give a try, so Im glad you found it enjoyable. Regarding the himbos...I think a body type subversion would be a neat twist, if you have a preference to how their hypnotized as well I can see what I can work with...
4/23/22, 2:57 AM
The opening note really cleared up some narrative ambiguity that I would have struggled with if I had NOT read your preface, but i don't knock the story for that because there was no straight forward way to address the nuances of Kai's full situation without totally ruining the pacing. Choosing to NOT explain in story was brave, and adding the opening note was smart. Kudos for both! As far as handling Kai's Gender Dysphoria, it's ... complex. Kai was born male but denied this to present as female? That makes Kaa's actions pretty crummy if such a thing were even remotely possible IRL. but that is not the intent of the story, so readers come into the story wanting and expecting male on male sex. I have my theories on the "white haired man cub" ~~Young Xehenort~~ that Kaa ate that augmented his powers is, and if that is the case Kaa might have unlocked real powerful magic. If Kai was born female and felt male but deeply denied his truth because his body didn't let him do otherwise THEN Kaa used a combination of hypnosis and magical transformation to alter Kai's body to fit Kai's mentality that would be less ... crummy. Depending on how you choose to interpret the narrative from Kai's perspective, it CAN read like that, but for what was written and knowing that malicious intent was no way here, you did well for a first foray into a trans interpretation. you seem like you want to improve your writing perspective as well as portray this style of character as respectfully as you know how, increasing that knowledge over time. I might suggest that Kaa HAS such magical abilities that he realizes he has when encountering Kai, and if he encounters interesting females that he can use his metamorphic talents to add females to his male harem, but skipping the gender dysphoria entirely, merely stunning a female with very basic hypnosis to the levels Kaa displayed before, using magic to alter these characters to male, then turning up the hypnotic intensity now that they are male to bamboozle them into not being able to remember that they were female before, but still sexually desire males. that way no character is off limits if you so choose to add them to Kaa's Harem! When we get aladdin and Hercules in the Harem, I wouldn't mind Axel being added to the mix if that excites you! other Square Enix Characters like Zidane and Leon would be lovely too!

SlutForHypno
4/23/22, 5:07 AM
@Mind Labyrinth Thanks for the input I appreciate it. I'm glad I didn't fuck up at all regarding how I presented Kai's story. The angle I went for was yes he was always a guy, which is why Kaa was able to so easily hypnotize him, but he was obviously in deep denial over it and because of that and the fact none of the characters knew of it at the time, He was addressed with female pronouns/names until he finally accepted whom he truly was, then I made sure the narrative was consistently in how to address him (minus Sora who found out a little later and immediately accepted who he was when being told). I'm also glad you found my disclaimer helpful. Obviously I could have implemented it in the story alot better, but at the end of the day, I'm not writing a full length novel so I didn't want to drag it out. I wanted a hot story about Kai fucking Sora's brain's out and then getting fucked by Master Kaa. So I'm glad you found it helpful, and feel free to continue giving your opinions on such matter. I do appreciate your feedback That said, yeah it was just a little something I wanted to experiment here before because I like to do a little writing outside of this porn stories so I wanted to see if I could write a decent transition story. The reason I decided to do this with Kai is a bit of a weird fun fact with Kingdom Hearts. You may not be aware, but Kingdom Hearts is pretty gay despite none of the characters being LGBT. Kairi (as in the character from the games, not Kai of this story) in particular has become a bit interesting because while she has always been straight, her character model (at least her hair) has always been inspired by Utada Hikaru, the person who sings the openings and Closing songs to Kingdome Hearts. The funny thing about that is Utada has recently come out as Non Binary, so I decided to have fun with that idea and play around with Kairi's gender, thus we now have Kai. That and I actually really like the relationship between Sora and Kairi in the games. But that was more so a one time thing and yeah, his powers do have the ability (to which I will go into a bit more detail later) because his powers in part rewrite reality itself. So I think the next time I do have a genderbend story, say a Jasmine or Aurora, I will basically have them turned male and have their entire memory rewritten as them always being male. I think that would generally be the smarter thing to do and will come off as a bit less malicious (because that was not my intention with this story haha). Regarding Aladdin and Hercules...Im still trying to figure out the beginning and how to hypnotize them (I think part of what makes Hypnosis so attractive is how the hypnotizer finds clever knew ways to hypnotize a person)...but lets just say you should really be looking forward to next week....and the week after don't be surprised if you see a certain money tailed character who will be getting a Remake of his classic video game Also sorry this reply is so long, I wanted to make sure to cover everything you said since you gave such a thorough, well thought out reply.
Anonymous
4/23/22, 4:29 AM
this is sooo hot… and sooo intimate!!!
4/23/22, 3:05 AM
I thought you did good in setting up Cory's just deserts and following through with all the changes that entail in him becoming Bruno. A dumb, overgrown, foreign brute who's a freak in his own way but thankfully sidesteps the potentially problematic issues of a transformation into some other sort of member of a freak show... So freaking hot. I also love seeing dumb muscular brutes being subs to smaller men, either their bottoms or tops. Wonder if the site has a tag for small tops, big bottoms. I wish you lingered more on Bruno trying to hold on to Cory and objecting and fighting the changes, and suggested more about the conditions he'd live in in his new life. Personally, I've long wanted to write a carnival transformation myself, and this inspired me to think some more on how I can set up my own carnival story, with the victims becoming a strongman, and a tattooed man, and maybe conjoined twins and a super tall man...

4/23/22, 3:25 AM
@BODriver I'll take that into account for my next piece, I honestly enjoy embellishing but my main concern was that I am too indulgement with my descriptions. I am glad to know people are interested in my victim's mental states because I will gladly take my time with it in the future.
4/23/22, 3:02 AM
Right. Now I’m now up to date.
4/23/22, 2:38 AM
This is very well written, erotic without being blatantly pornographic (not that there's anything wrong with that!) and with a voice similar to the fairy tales I read as a kid. Extremely enjoyable.
4/23/22, 2:32 AM
As soon as I saw Nasir's name, especially after "Antikythera Mechanism" all I could think of is, "are his copper ingots going to be good quality?"
4/16/22, 6:42 PM
Love this story. Would love to see more with the clone(s) :)

4/16/22, 7:27 PM
Sorry, no clones. The purpose of the clones is to replace the originals and take their place in life so no one notices that they're missing

Anonymous
4/18/22, 4:41 AM
@Fire302 - But that increases the population by 1/4

4/18/22, 7:36 AM
Oh shit your right, I didn’t think about that until you brought it up. I guess copying a person would increase the population, I don’t know how to fix this. But then again do you think Thanos thought his plan through?

Anonymous
4/23/22, 1:04 AM
@Fire302 - I'd assume the clones get recycled by getting re-cast as new men whenever their genetic counterpart gets placed with a master.
Anonymous
4/22/22, 11:52 PM
So hot. It’ll be fun to see if he keeps hanging out with other guys, even if he knows what it’ll do them. Maybe he eventually goes to see a doctor and the doctor ends up with a little more latex on than his gloves.
Will Ryder
4/22/22, 11:02 PM
Gr8 idea with Pink🧡K lol! 🤣 It's gonna be 🌟FUN🌟 reading what other effects it has on our young, teenage hero ✨👨✨ BTW: Nice use of the archaic language - Gosh Darn It..! 😉

4/22/22, 11:03 PM
@Will Ryder Thanks the client really wanted it to be Silver Age Superboy, so I got to have some fun with it.