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Anonymous
4/22/22, 11:52 PM
So hot. It’ll be fun to see if he keeps hanging out with other guys, even if he knows what it’ll do them. Maybe he eventually goes to see a doctor and the doctor ends up with a little more latex on than his gloves.
Will Ryder
4/22/22, 11:02 PM
Gr8 idea with Pink🧡K lol! 🤣 It's gonna be 🌟FUN🌟 reading what other effects it has on our young, teenage hero ✨👨✨ BTW: Nice use of the archaic language - Gosh Darn It..! 😉

4/22/22, 11:03 PM
@Will Ryder Thanks the client really wanted it to be Silver Age Superboy, so I got to have some fun with it.
4/22/22, 10:04 PM
Just another perfectly normal day for Nasir. Wonder what another turn of the crank would bring?
4/22/22, 8:32 PM
this story was pretty fun, it deserves a sequel
4/17/22, 2:21 AM
The humiliation in the story is very present, but is it erotic humiliation or just humiliation? By the end of this chapter I was kind of rooting for the main character to put pool cleaner in Mark's coffee. Was anything about Mark's offer sincere, or was this all just a plot to have a humiliation slave? I'm not sure I would give this story another chapter of my attention to find out. It kind of lost me by this point. My only suggestion would be to either vary the action, or move the story along. I do not think you will have readers for 9-10 chapters of this story unless something happens or progresses to change the situation.

D&D
4/22/22, 8:29 PM
@amul Thanks for your comment. Mark will remain an ambiguous figure in the next chapter as well, but will start to reveal his intentions in the fifth. These chapters were used more to make Luke fall into despair and surrender to fate, from the next he will begin to be more active, or rather passive.
4/22/22, 7:07 PM
Very hot! Just the kind of transformation I would want to see happen at a cursed circus like this. Loved his bald head and singlet, though I wish he'd stayed young and hairless, a youthful strongman to go with his obscene huge scantily clad muscles!
PromethiumJPM
4/22/22, 11:32 AM
I know I could use more of this story! Please!

4/22/22, 7:02 PM
@PromethiumJPM more to cum!
4/22/22, 6:57 PM
I love the rhythm and language you use in this piece! I already told you this one on one, but the hyacinths and honey are an especially sensual image that I love a lot. Disturbingly erotic and I think you've awoken something in me xD, so thanks for that. Thank you so much for this gift.
Mar 12, 2015
anonymous
4/22/22, 6:40 PM
Nice story but in anything more than 140 characters I find the use of "u" and "r" incredibly annoying
Anonymous
4/22/22, 6:30 PM
My favorite story from you yet!