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4/17/22, 2:21 AM
The humiliation in the story is very present, but is it erotic humiliation or just humiliation? By the end of this chapter I was kind of rooting for the main character to put pool cleaner in Mark's coffee. Was anything about Mark's offer sincere, or was this all just a plot to have a humiliation slave? I'm not sure I would give this story another chapter of my attention to find out. It kind of lost me by this point. My only suggestion would be to either vary the action, or move the story along. I do not think you will have readers for 9-10 chapters of this story unless something happens or progresses to change the situation.

D&D
4/22/22, 8:29 PM
@amul Thanks for your comment. Mark will remain an ambiguous figure in the next chapter as well, but will start to reveal his intentions in the fifth. These chapters were used more to make Luke fall into despair and surrender to fate, from the next he will begin to be more active, or rather passive.
4/22/22, 7:07 PM
Very hot! Just the kind of transformation I would want to see happen at a cursed circus like this. Loved his bald head and singlet, though I wish he'd stayed young and hairless, a youthful strongman to go with his obscene huge scantily clad muscles!
PromethiumJPM
4/22/22, 11:32 AM
I know I could use more of this story! Please!

4/22/22, 7:02 PM
@PromethiumJPM more to cum!
4/22/22, 6:57 PM
I love the rhythm and language you use in this piece! I already told you this one on one, but the hyacinths and honey are an especially sensual image that I love a lot. Disturbingly erotic and I think you've awoken something in me xD, so thanks for that. Thank you so much for this gift.
Mar 12, 2015
anonymous
4/22/22, 6:40 PM
Nice story but in anything more than 140 characters I find the use of "u" and "r" incredibly annoying
Anonymous
4/22/22, 6:30 PM
My favorite story from you yet!
4/22/22, 5:29 PM
Hot new chapter!

Rub.berized
4/22/22, 6:16 PM
@NeedControlling I'm glad you liked it.
4/22/22, 4:13 PM
Great story I would love to obey u
suitedsubmissive
4/22/22, 2:53 PM
This was an excellent story, Sir! The writing and concept were not very well done. I love transformation stories of this nature, ones that incorporate such a complete physical and mental reversal into the plot. It's especially exciting to read about someone so cocky and arrogant becoming submissive. (And the cock shrinking is a special favorite of mine) I'm always excited to read your work!
4/22/22, 1:50 PM
Love a circus story and this one doesn’t disappoint. Would have liked a more thorough description of the transformation because that’s what you do so well but that’s me being selfish. Thank you again for continuing to write.