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Evan
4/21/22, 1:02 AM
@Cuddle-Switch. I did not really think about Rhys uncovering a trail of his own leading to Aris rather than obscuring it. And I should have. :) Brilliant idea. And a great way to add a little conflict to Rhys's and Aris's relationship. Why do you like characters ending in S. My brain struggles with using apostrophes with them. :D In case it wasn't clear, I am very eager for the next chapter and to see where you are both heading with things. Iskios has information the crew could use but also a vested interest in not intervening to keep competition to a minimum. Unless getting them to concentrate on their lost crew member opens more opportunities for him, perhaps. Having Jasper show off and Rhys still maintaining dominance was masterfully crafted. You should be proud. It was clear and felt very natural and real.
Will Ryder
4/21/22, 12:50 AM
You've done another gr8 job with this chapter 👍📖😇📖👍 It's well written with good pacing & characterisation. I 💖 being inside Sammy & Sean's 👨Head-Space👨 I'm looking 4ward 2 see how Sean handles his pre-dick-ament & what Sammy gets up 2 next 😁
4/21/22, 12:00 AM
one of my favorite stories!!!! can’t wait for more
4/20/22, 11:39 PM
Cada vez mas interesante!. Gracias por compartir!
4/20/22, 9:57 PM
Jaison and Paul Brothers, I want to say. No Jack and Paul ;)
4/20/22, 9:49 PM
Oddball series with conceptual, trippy delivery, and now it delivers on a stupendously hot sex scene. Might be the highest rating I've ever given a story.
4/20/22, 9:45 PM
Hello Elmara! I'm very happy you come back to write. You are my favourite author ever! Congrats for this new chapter. I miss you a lot. So, my personal fetish is about medical stuff (like Physical exams with doctors and hot dicked straight dumb jocks) or massage. Maybe you can imagine something in this escenarios with Theo and Jon or with Jack and Paul brothers from slutty naughty jock series. It will be epic!!. Anyway, anything your write is always awsome. Thanks for your work dude.
4/20/22, 9:45 PM
Good stuff. I felt the Officer's orgasm was suitably preposterous.
4/20/22, 9:38 PM
The blow job 'right there in the store' and then B.Dawg's transformation was a game-changer. B.Dawgs' forced change was something, mate. Up until now, I was getting 'silly', but now I'm getting psychedelic, mind-bending, avant-garde as well. Added to that it's now making me realise this was always there; The series was always ludicrous; now it's _still_ that, but consciousness-warping as well. I was sticking with it to be honourable. Now it's I think one of the most significant things I've ever read on the site. I can't compliment it enough. Good Shit.
4/20/22, 9:15 PM
I need to confess for context I read ahead a few chapters and then came back to comment and rate this-and-each chapter I read this session. I did it for no other reason than not wishing to break up my reading with Spider's-brain-install:/feedback-module/formulate/opinion/scan-for-opinion-kindness/spellcheck/post/re-read/return to reading-the-series-as-a-reader mode. So I did it for selfish reasons but boy oh boy, am I glad I did. I think this is the last chapter where readers (if they're anything like me) will be vulnerable to 'not getting this' and saying "nah, whatever this is, it's too stupid for me, or something." Because of where the series goes (IMO), this chapter is— in hindsight— fine. This and most of the chapters become re-readable in a more legitimate light (again IMO). I was getting kinda tired of the softness and the silliness it was starting to feel wilfully pea-brained. In hindsight, however, this chapter is fine and I've raised my ratings for it both accordingly, and, for reasons I'll go into in subsequent chapter's comments.