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5/26/22, 5:42 PM
Perfect end to this amazing story! Glad he got null bulged and that trapped him in a mindless drone state, likely forever unless someone can unseal the jockstrap
bigsad
5/26/22, 5:35 PM
I love Naga!Kaa x Mowgli stories so this was a delightful read! I really liked how descriptive the coiling and slow swallowing process was. I’m looking forward to reading your next story!
5/26/22, 5:35 PM
I love that very much. You have good write the great story 👍
5/26/22, 5:26 PM
I truly loved this story! It has all the fairy tale elements I myself like to play with! Thank you for sharing a wonderful tale with us. It would make for a wonderful children's book to read at bedtime, no doubt!
Azuri Foxcoon
5/26/22, 5:04 PM
The way the encounter should have went! It’s a masterful re-telling. Can’t wait to read more! ❤️
5/26/22, 4:48 PM
Kaa eats the Disney Universe? :laughing:
5/26/22, 4:41 PM
This was such a lovely little story! A cute fairytale with a representative happy ending, it almost feels like the sort of thing that could go in a collection for children. Thanks for expanding the horizons of Cupid!
R P
5/26/22, 2:34 PM
This was a lot of fun, and delightfully weird. Sam and Cody are already so cute together - I can’t wait for them to go further!

5/26/22, 2:42 PM
@R P I'm glad the fun and the weird are coming through. Sam and Cody decided not to extend the chapter another few thousand words and will pick up where we left off with chapter 4. Thank you for reading!
5/26/22, 1:47 PM
This story grows more bizarre (in a good way) and magical by the chapter, sublime work.

5/26/22, 1:57 PM
@Twan Andersen This is great praise coming from you, much appreciated Twan!
5/26/22, 12:43 PM
Not just here on this Forum, I have many friends who are writers in the Real World, too. I have a bookshelf reserved for books by other self-publishers and friends. There's a fun "if you buy my book, I'll buy yours" back and forth that I love about all of us. Twitter is loaded with "post your cover photo on this thread" kind of groups -- I take advantage of them all. Anyway, the one comment I've gotten from all of them is praise for the video montage section of this chapter. I do very little "meta" writing in this book -- though CENTAUROMACHY is loaded with it -- but this particular moment continues to get positive feedback. Said my friend Wayne Purdy, author of [BUTTERFLY GIRL](https://www.amazon.com/Butterfly-Girl-Heck-Collins-Mystery/dp/B094T5SMXC/ref=sr_1_1?crid=38QMDGOYCR4I6&keywords=butterfly+girl+purdy&qid=1653568814&sprefix=butterfly+girl+purdy%2Caps%2C48&sr=8-1), "I've never read a video montage before. Clever, clever, clever."