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4/20/22, 11:39 PM
Cada vez mas interesante!. Gracias por compartir!
4/20/22, 9:57 PM
Jaison and Paul Brothers, I want to say. No Jack and Paul ;)
4/20/22, 9:49 PM
Oddball series with conceptual, trippy delivery, and now it delivers on a stupendously hot sex scene. Might be the highest rating I've ever given a story.
4/20/22, 9:45 PM
Hello Elmara! I'm very happy you come back to write. You are my favourite author ever! Congrats for this new chapter. I miss you a lot. So, my personal fetish is about medical stuff (like Physical exams with doctors and hot dicked straight dumb jocks) or massage. Maybe you can imagine something in this escenarios with Theo and Jon or with Jack and Paul brothers from slutty naughty jock series. It will be epic!!. Anyway, anything your write is always awsome. Thanks for your work dude.
4/20/22, 9:45 PM
Good stuff. I felt the Officer's orgasm was suitably preposterous.
4/20/22, 9:38 PM
The blow job 'right there in the store' and then B.Dawg's transformation was a game-changer. B.Dawgs' forced change was something, mate. Up until now, I was getting 'silly', but now I'm getting psychedelic, mind-bending, avant-garde as well. Added to that it's now making me realise this was always there; The series was always ludicrous; now it's _still_ that, but consciousness-warping as well. I was sticking with it to be honourable. Now it's I think one of the most significant things I've ever read on the site. I can't compliment it enough. Good Shit.
4/20/22, 9:15 PM
I need to confess for context I read ahead a few chapters and then came back to comment and rate this-and-each chapter I read this session. I did it for no other reason than not wishing to break up my reading with Spider's-brain-install:/feedback-module/formulate/opinion/scan-for-opinion-kindness/spellcheck/post/re-read/return to reading-the-series-as-a-reader mode. So I did it for selfish reasons but boy oh boy, am I glad I did. I think this is the last chapter where readers (if they're anything like me) will be vulnerable to 'not getting this' and saying "nah, whatever this is, it's too stupid for me, or something." Because of where the series goes (IMO), this chapter is— in hindsight— fine. This and most of the chapters become re-readable in a more legitimate light (again IMO). I was getting kinda tired of the softness and the silliness it was starting to feel wilfully pea-brained. In hindsight, however, this chapter is fine and I've raised my ratings for it both accordingly, and, for reasons I'll go into in subsequent chapter's comments.
4/20/22, 8:37 PM
Love
4/20/22, 8:08 PM
Hard to pick who I’m happier for , Reese or Nathan
4/19/22, 3:11 AM
Very much enjoying the story. I have to say, Mr. Warwick is the more intriguing of the two doms. The father is a bit too clinical in his approach, whereas Warwick is willing to take full control and not out of scientific curiosity but rather a true impulse to completely dominate his slave. However it seems unrealistic that the father would actually trust Mr. Warwick's assurances! He's quite intelligent and surely can see through it.

4/19/22, 5:37 PM
@amul Love your Muscle Cow series! I'm never certain who my audience is but the story so far is mainly written for guys who fantasise about hypnotised rather than hypnotising others. As I wrote this section the thought kept popping in my head - does it make you more horny to be hypnotised by someone you trust (dad) or by someone who tells you to trust them, but deep down you know you shouldn't (Mr Warwick). I concluded the second option probably works better. However, perhaps it is slightly unwise to entirely trust the dad. More to come in part 3!

Rubber_Lover14
4/20/22, 7:42 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Just a thought when I was reading Amuls comment. What if daddy dearest is puppeting Mr Warwick in order to enslave his song :eyes: idk, that's just the idea that popped into my head. Cant wait to see what happens next.

4/20/22, 7:57 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 Well Daddy did hypnotize Warwick. Can Mr. Warwick ever truly be the one in control? It’s a good thought.