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Rubber_Lover14
4/18/22, 7:59 PM
Great story. Loved the hypnosis. I'd love to see more links added. Like musk or feet or stuff like that. One thing I'd be curious in seeing is if his master, daddy dearest, will abandon his silly ethics and completely enslave his son

4/19/22, 5:22 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thanks for your kind commentary - I enjoyed your series 'A Jock's karma' very much. I can certainly add some kinks to the next episode and am planning to make the dad more depraved, much more depraved

Rubber_Lover14
4/19/22, 5:46 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Aww. Im glad you like my series ^^. I really enjoy your series too. and i cant wait to see how deprived the dad becomes. I wonder if the son will resist at some point/realise this isnt normal, or is he already too far gone? cant wait for the next part ^^
4/19/22, 12:34 AM
This is good, really good. I do hope this stays mainly a father/son Fic though, other than as a therapist and master the dad hasn't been characterized much

4/19/22, 5:28 PM
@fleed412 The dad is teaching the son what his place is. The characters are defined by their actions, except for the son who has the privelege of narrating the story, but every situation can be seen from multiple angles so perhaps it is time to change the narrator
4/18/22, 11:25 PM
Personally, I think if Mr. Warwick did not use the new gas with his father, and thus also turn him into a slave, leaving him as a single Master...

4/19/22, 5:25 PM
@Maxigay Agree. I always enjoy a battle for supremacy between two doms. Can't say I know what will happen next, when I start drafting the next chapter the characters will let me know!
4/19/22, 5:24 PM
Loving this story so far! Hail Penis!
hairyartist
4/19/22, 5:11 PM
I love it, thank you~
Anonymous
4/19/22, 2:13 PM
Note to moderators.... this chapter is supposed to be visible in Spiral section... I don't see it there.
Will Ryder
4/19/22, 1:35 PM
The Return 🤩f Sammy Parker I 💗 where the story is heading👍 The tone of the story (so far) is lighter 💡😇💡 And it's gr8 that we have both Sammy & Sean's - 🙂POV🙃 I'm looking 4ward 2 the next chapter 📖🤓📖
Anonymous
4/19/22, 1:21 PM
I would love an epilogue from Stephen's POV to maybe clear up some questions from this chapter
4/19/22, 7:38 AM
I can’t believe I had no idea about this story! I loved it from beginning to end, last chapter and this one. It’s so _wholesome_. What’s hilarious and wonderful to me is that Jon does think Theo is hot, but either doesn’t connect it to their frequent, extremely dirty fucking, or does and just plays the role for fun. At the same time, there does seem to be something pheromonic about these hot jocks’ cocks. I can’t wait to find out more. (All I’d suggest is to take all that cum the jocks are producing to another level and bring in some cum inflation. A little bit of a gut in a flat stomach, brought about by a massive load of cum, is just the hottest thing… but that’s just my opinion.)

4/19/22, 12:49 PM
@Soren Fitz Just wanted to chime in and say I like a bit of bloat, too! Sexy as hell. :D
4/19/22, 12:49 PM
Welcome back! I remember falling in love with Jon the instead I started reading about him—and this just proved it more. It’s fascinating to read a story where sex is totally separated from romance and even orientation, as it were: Jon genuinely believes that all of Theo’s actions are harmless fun. It’s an odd attitude for sure, but one that’s definitely interesting to read about! Now all I need to do is find a guy like Jon in real life… :p