Recent Comments

leopup
4/18/22, 8:41 AM
What was Stephen's original motivation for starting everything. Wasn't he straight? Learning more about Stephen's line of thought would be nice.
4/18/22, 7:56 AM
Sehr geile Story.. ich denke es gibt einige deutsche Leser.. und wenn es bekannt wird das man hier deutsche Geschichten findet können das auch noch mehr werden. Bin gespannt wie es weiter geht.
Nov 30, 2021
Anonymous
4/18/22, 3:10 AM
love the concept, would be great to see a more slow-burn, developed story
PromethiumJPM
4/18/22, 2:42 AM
Love that Martin is a hybrid now, breeder of Drones! My body has been tingling since I started reading this series!
4/17/22, 10:51 PM
Already a big fan of the series, but this was knocked out of the park! Looking forward to more!

4/18/22, 1:42 AM
thanks @Pisces142 - really appreciate it
Martin
4/17/22, 9:52 PM
Die Stories bleiben geil und man ist gespannt was als nächstes passiert! Schade nur, dass Du immer nur recht wenig Leser haben wirst... So viel Deutsche User gibt's halt leider nicht.
4/17/22, 8:01 PM
Oh man this was my favorite story from you when I read your stories on Nifty. I agree with mstgay3000 about liking the old darker ending but this was just as great too. Curious if you are considering on remastering the 2nd chapter of this as well or making a new chapter? Either way thanks for this it was such a hot read!

4/17/22, 8:31 PM
Hey there, @AxelCyclone - glad you like 2.0. Right now the plan is to update the second part as well - maybe even put out a third part. I also have a whole library of older stories that will need to be updated to satisfy certain requirements.

4/17/22, 8:58 PM
@stimle Oh that sounds amazing. All though This series was my favorite Andres was my 2nd favorite and a whole lot others are tied for 3rd haha. Ill miss the hotel scene but excited to see joaquin at his job and whatever else you have planned!

Martin
4/17/22, 9:40 PM
@stimle If those 'requirements' make your stories so much better, then I'm really happy that you want to satisfy them :grin:
blankbot
4/16/22, 2:58 PM
Great writing!

4/17/22, 8:32 PM
@blankbot Thank you!!
Anonymous
4/17/22, 5:51 AM
Hope you write the sequel to this. Jaoquin is one of your character that I love and still reading about him after all these years.

4/17/22, 8:31 PM
Thanks, man. I'm working on updating the second part and am contemplating a third part.
4/16/22, 4:43 PM
I enjoyed both versions😊 I like all the new details on this one, but also liked the darker ending in the original too. Well done on both!👏

4/17/22, 8:29 PM
@MstGay3000 Thank you. Over the years I've often thought about updating older stories. Circumstances here forced my hand.