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4/18/22, 10:57 AM
Interesting chapter…the sex stuff didn’t do it for me, although I absolutely LOVED the bit where Willy and Ricky make out (and make love) in public…I’ve always wanted to do that. I’m also impressed by how well you understand the nature of power: your writing about how the football team, and Pete in particular, using Harlow to repair their own egos is a reminder of how bullying works (tormenting those weaker to make yourself feel better). I hope that Pete gets a healthy helping of just deserts for his horrible nature—even this didn’t feel like enough. Now we wait…

4/18/22, 1:47 PM
thanks for the feed back @Feed Your Head . It's always interesting to see what people like and dislike about my stories, and generally the thing people like is the introspective analysis of sexuality, sex and power but I've got to learn to keep a consistent tone throughout as some of the twists take some people off guard and out of the mood. Glad you're enjoying the series anyway, writing the final part now!
Anonymous
4/16/22, 11:49 PM
Loved this! Waiting for the next chapter!

4/17/22, 4:43 PM
Thank you @ ! Writing the next chapter now, just gotta stop myself from cumming as it stalls the writing process XD

4/18/22, 5:46 AM
@GoonNoob I know that feeling well. Loving this series!

4/18/22, 1:44 PM
Thanks @Lusty Stallion ! lol I get so turned on by what I'm about to write that I cum and don't end up writing it till I've reloaded XD
4/18/22, 6:44 AM
Martin iPhones always auto translate. I read all the foreign language stories although things definitely get lost in translation sometimes lol. Good job on the story!

SklaveTimm
4/18/22, 11:11 AM
@Mrdick How good or bad is the auto translated version? Is it so bad, that a regular translation is worth the work?

4/18/22, 11:23 AM
@SklaveTimm well I guess that’s hard to say since I don’t read German. But I generally understand what your trying to write.
SklaveTimm
4/18/22, 11:19 AM
Danke, danke, danke! So viel Lob, da muss ich ja aufpassen, dass ich nicht abhebe. 😁 Ich hatte über Ostern etwas mehr Zeit als üblich, weshalb einige Teile zur Geschichte hinzugefügt werden konnten. Der eigentliche Plan war mal, dass es jede Woche einen Teil geben soll. Ich hoffe das auch durchzuhalten. Das Schreiben selbst gelingt ganz gut, aber.... Je umfangreicher die Story wird, um ao öfter muss ich in den alten Teilen schauen um nicht zu viel zu wiederholen oder gar meine Charaktere zu verwechseln... Bezüglich des Hinweises von Martin, ich poste mehrmals in der Woche links zu meinen stories auf Twitter, sollte also nach und nach eine kleine Leserschaft hier her bringen.
Anonymous
6/20/21, 7:55 AM
Really well written! I’m not a huge fan of humiliation for humiliation’s sake - it needs to be part of something bigger - so it didn’t strike as big a chord with me as it will with some people, but it left me intrigued to see where you’re going next

4/18/22, 9:37 AM
@Anonymous, Ditto.
4/18/22, 9:30 AM
I enjoy a slow burn. This one was just a tad too slow for my taste. Then again, I plan to continue reading your work.
leopup
4/18/22, 8:41 AM
What was Stephen's original motivation for starting everything. Wasn't he straight? Learning more about Stephen's line of thought would be nice.
4/18/22, 7:56 AM
Sehr geile Story.. ich denke es gibt einige deutsche Leser.. und wenn es bekannt wird das man hier deutsche Geschichten findet können das auch noch mehr werden. Bin gespannt wie es weiter geht.
Nov 30, 2021
Anonymous
4/18/22, 3:10 AM
love the concept, would be great to see a more slow-burn, developed story
PromethiumJPM
4/18/22, 2:42 AM
Love that Martin is a hybrid now, breeder of Drones! My body has been tingling since I started reading this series!