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Will Ryder
4/19/22, 3:18 AM
A brilliant read from start 2 finish 👍📖😘📖👍 I thought the seduction process & then conversion of Sammy, Eli & 🐺Alpha🐺 bro John were well written. And then having the tables turn on our narrator was VERY satisfying👍 All Hail Alpha Sammy lol! 🤣
4/18/22, 9:10 PM
This needs more! Would love to see how Henry keeps Dustin and handles the marriage problem.
4/18/22, 8:21 PM
Would love more from this story! A fave of mine!
4/18/22, 4:02 PM
im liking this series i wonder how many guys read this wished their cock could do this to a friend
Harry
4/18/22, 2:44 PM
I wish I were Jax and I could suffer all that humiliation against my will, what would I have to do for that to happen to me? and I hope I can find out what more humiliating things happen to Jax
4/18/22, 2:40 PM
the formation of the story is weird, some parts are normal and others aren't
Harry
4/18/22, 2:27 PM
I loved the story I am glad that we continue it with Blake and that Polter possessed him again I am excited with what Polter now does to humiliate Blake I really would like to be Blake right now
4/18/22, 7:17 AM
I liked this a lot, though I would have enjoyed a few more commands rather than solely the sex stuff (I am glad you flashed back to the party, though!). Still one of the best writers around - always love seeing new work from you!

4/18/22, 2:10 PM
@StageShowMM thank you for the kind words!😊
4/18/22, 10:57 AM
Interesting chapter…the sex stuff didn’t do it for me, although I absolutely LOVED the bit where Willy and Ricky make out (and make love) in public…I’ve always wanted to do that. I’m also impressed by how well you understand the nature of power: your writing about how the football team, and Pete in particular, using Harlow to repair their own egos is a reminder of how bullying works (tormenting those weaker to make yourself feel better). I hope that Pete gets a healthy helping of just deserts for his horrible nature—even this didn’t feel like enough. Now we wait…

4/18/22, 1:47 PM
thanks for the feed back @Feed Your Head . It's always interesting to see what people like and dislike about my stories, and generally the thing people like is the introspective analysis of sexuality, sex and power but I've got to learn to keep a consistent tone throughout as some of the twists take some people off guard and out of the mood. Glad you're enjoying the series anyway, writing the final part now!
Anonymous
4/16/22, 11:49 PM
Loved this! Waiting for the next chapter!

4/17/22, 4:43 PM
Thank you @ ! Writing the next chapter now, just gotta stop myself from cumming as it stalls the writing process XD

4/18/22, 5:46 AM
@GoonNoob I know that feeling well. Loving this series!

4/18/22, 1:44 PM
Thanks @Lusty Stallion ! lol I get so turned on by what I'm about to write that I cum and don't end up writing it till I've reloaded XD