Recent Comments

5/24/22, 12:07 AM
I’m so glad that people commented on this and brought it to my attention. It’s quite insightful (unsurprising, I knew Bracken was a sharp guy). It’s great food for thought and made me examine why I do basically hate certain stories that other people love. I’ve long since made my peace with the fact that some W.B. stories just don’t work for me because I will find them too mean, that being said, sometimes they’re just mean enough but also hot and so I find they work for me.
May 14, 2022
5/24/22, 12:01 AM
WOW! Absolutely incredible. You know exactly where to go and what to do. Loved it! Hope there will be more.
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5/24/22, 12:01 AM
The first chapter has been one of my favorites since you posted it. I’ve come back to it over and over. I’m so glad to see you continuing the story, can’t wait for even more!
5/23/22, 10:39 PM
Such a fantastic ending to a truly amazing story. Heartwarming to the nth degree, wonderfully silly and filled with love. A happy ending for all, and a secret for the future. A great corner of the Norismoverse I'll continue to explore.
5/23/22, 10:37 PM
I read the second part first because it was short and piqued my interest. Wound up having to read the whole thing. You did a fantastic job of keeping the story tight, fast moving and spare of word. It comes across as very well edited, or else you’re just a natural at distilling your stories down to horny thoughts/ideas and a minimum of plot to string them together in a way that works. This one gets a rare 5 scrolls from me for being so well written.
5/23/22, 10:27 PM
so glad you decided to follow up the original story! this chapter was super hot!
5/23/22, 9:58 PM
This was amazing!!! Of course, my favorite part, the out of nowhere turn: "He was going to murder his brother." The silliness of it all, the expected other twin that works street corners... Just all of it! This is the Norismo unleashed I love to read. On a separate note, cause it deserves it: Sushismo? I'm still laughing. This is so wonderfully silly and lovable! One crisis has been averted without needing to do anything but all the work is now there for the new crisis. Honestly, can't wait to keep reading.
5/23/22, 9:31 PM
Loving these moral men being made into absolutely horrible narcissists. The first chapter is a favorite and now this one is too. Eli is my faaaave. Love seeing the people he’d earned respect from previously being completely betrayed by him.
5/23/22, 8:47 PM
Loved this chapter even more than the first. Very hot!
5/23/22, 6:57 PM
need a sequel, I will do alot of dreaming about this happening to me?