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Apr 15, 2022
4/15/22, 8:26 PM
Loving the weight gain, humiliation, and mind break.
Mar 28, 2022
Anonymous
4/15/22, 7:41 PM
Hot
Apr 15, 2022
4/15/22, 8:27 AM
... I dont get it. Can someone explain it to me?
4/15/22, 2:56 PM
@billi @fafa and anyone else I guess I didn’t convey it well enough, but when Stephen’s cum hit the book he linked to it and broke Galen’s link to it. Without his link to the book, Galen’s awareness that anything was changed went away, and to him this was how things had always been. Additionally, since Stephen was linked to both the book and the amulet, he gained full control and all the changes became permanent and world-wide. I’ll see if I can find a good way to convey it within the story to make it more obvious what was going on at the end.
4/15/22, 6:09 PM
@Cock TF Boi yeah that's what I thought happened, it's just that the tattoo of the tome on Galen's arm made me confused if he's still got a connection to it or not. Also is Stephen now aware of the whole thing? Regardless, what a hot story, can't wait for your next one!
Apr 14, 2022
4/15/22, 2:48 PM
Oh man late to the party but its growing still! Looks like this part of the series is coming to an end soon with a couple chapters left! Hope to see Hercules ans I saw last chapter you were thinking about a human version of Simba that sounded kind of fun. Are you thinking about doing a new series or continue with Kaa? Maybe bringing in another persuasive master to start their new harem? I saw you were thinking of Robins from DC and MyHero, would love to see the Superboys get converted and Mirio from MyHero. Think I have something for Muscled Himbos becoming perfect bottoms for their masters haha. Either way I've been enjoying the series and excited to see where it goes wherever you take it. Thanks for the hot chapters!
SlutForHypno
4/15/22, 5:11 PM
@AxelCycloneI Im always open to suggestions. I was thinking of continuing this series for a little longer and then maybe well see about a new harem. I think I can get at least 10 chapters out of this though haha so I can get to heracles and if you have any himbo tops and how you would like them hypnotized id be down to listen.
Apr 14, 2022
4/15/22, 3:04 PM
Oh man!! I’m so excited to see another update from you! This was excellent and I loved the premise! Thank you for sharing!!!
4/15/22, 4:30 PM
@Footnotized glad u liked it!😊
Apr 15, 2022
4/15/22, 4:19 PM
LOVE TO LIVE IT
Apr 2, 2022
Evan
4/14/22, 4:24 AM
Whoa. So much happened in this chapter. Rhys's surprise and genuine horror at the reality of the Argent was really well communicated. I think it confirmed to Jasper and readers just how out of touch the sky dwellers are. For all their keen eyesight, distance from the issue warps perspective. I loved that a lot of the pollution and rubbish was mistaken for something more beautiful from high above. Coins moulding their world and seeing what they want. Glass bottles reflecting light interpreted as wet, glistening rocks. That was very well done. Both as imagery and as a commentary on the Coins and slum disconnect. Jasper's time with the Coins has felt a little dream-like. Fantasy heightened, unreal. They live in that sort of world and this brought them both very literally back to Earth. Firstly, I loved the approach to showing Coins aren't invulnerable, and can actually be quite stupid with their day-to-day being so secure and their privilege giving them that false sense of total control over life. Going down there without security was pretty arrogant and foolish. Glad it didn't end badly and hopefully they learn from that. Jasper coming into his own, using his instincts and taking charge and yet still managing to stay in a respectful pet boundary was masterfully done and even applauded by Rhys. I love that Rhys got to see this very different side of Jasper, in his old element and really reinforcing what they'd just talked about with the incident with Callix. If Rhys hadn't already accepted his explanation and taken that perspective into account, I think this may have opened him more to it. The scene escaping the Coin-hunting slum denizens was very tense. I was genuinely afraid for Rhys and Jasper. I liked Iskios and his more cavalier attitude to the Coin present. Very believable that his interest laid more in having a competitor confirmed out of the game and not all that adversarial once confirmed. A little teasing that he was a pet now but what does he care if he gets more patch to play with. And all of this, with all it is already accomplishing for character and bonding our two favourite owner/pet combo, it also moves the main intrigue and plot along with Rhys gaining a lead or two to find out just how much he doesn't know about Jasper. I'm very curious what he does with that information. And how he feels about it. He's not stupid (if you don't count unescorted slumming) so he was pretty sure Jasper's criminal history was more than just a little theft here and there. His ability to access the secure lab was enough to tip him off to that. But having it confirmed is another matter. And will Iskios' witness to Jasper's behaviour get back to Seth, Nova, and Julian? How will they see it. Everyone has their own view of things and it taints every interaction, will they be able to interpret anything Iskios said as further proof of coercion or will the chance to escape on home turf put a spanner in their thoughts. Surely he didn't take the opportunity just because he's not finished his con yet and this earns more trust and freedom... So, so many layers in this world, with these characters, and your writing. It's impressive and a delight to read and immerse myself in. And that's before we even talk about the incredibly hot sex going on. Definitely exposed a new kink for me with all of Jasper and Rhys's talk about exposure of him being fucked like the slut he is in the automated vehicle flying up to home. And how eagerly Jasper engages in pleasing Rhys's body. Obedience to the point of almost entrancing himself thanks to his conditioning. And reaching climax with the combination of his owner inside him and being seen being a wanton slutty pet from the outside. I am curious where things will go once Rhys talks to Jasper about hypnosis. It's a very easy road. And, of course, once they talk about it and he puts him under on purpose the trail to Aris's programming gets obscured that little bit more. Their tenderness and passion is wonderful to see. And hot, of course. Like Rhys, I also LOVE how much precum our little pet produces. Going to finish off by thanking you both again for writing such an amazing story together. And you have a huge fan eagerly anticipating more chapters when time allows.
4/15/22, 2:34 PM
@Evan Yes, yes, yes! Having established Coins as these, in their opinion, ultra powerful beings that are capable of anything that they desire, but then contrasting it with Adrien and Seth's view of them as vapid, vain creatures, we now wanted to show how the truth is, as usual, something that is somewhere in the middle. We were definitely aiming to have Rhys's arrogance and obliviousness on full display in this chapter, so I'm glad that that's coming through. We wanted to show him being well-meaning but not necessarily equipped for the realities he was going to find. I had been concerned that the chase might be a bit too cartoonish, so I'm glad that it came across well. I find that kind of action hard to write, but I guess some things are common images because they're how things might actually happen, especially in an unplanned situation like that. Iskios was a delight to write, and it was fun to let Jasper go off a little like that about his new priorities while also being more wholly himself, in a situation he was familiar with. I can't wait to share more about so many of the situations you're curious about. Those are definitely seeds that I'm excited to explore. So, so glad to hear your thoughts on that sex scene! It was a delight to write together.
Cuddle-switch
4/15/22, 3:33 PM
@Evan I’m really glad you enjoyed Rhys’s realization and reaction to the trash. At the risk of seeming like a dick, I have to kind of brag a bit about that. I was writing the part where they arrived at the water’s edge, and all my thoughts about how the scene would look came together at once. Time helped of course, but I’m really proud of how much I did of that on my own. Especially the bit about the glass bottles. I wanted it to be a harsh slap in the face for Rhys, so he could really have that dramatic shift in perspective. It’s so encouraging to see that you liked it. For when Jasper had to step in and get them out of there, writing that type of situation was very challenging at first. Making sure we show off Jasper while still leaving Rhys in some type of “dominant” position was difficult for me, so I’m glad I had time around for that one. Time was right about Iskios. Very fun. We have a few plans surrounding what Iskios will do now, as well as what Rhys will do, but you’ll just need to wait for the next chapter :). The sex scene was a lot of fun. We really had to think about how sex with an enormous Coin would work in the back of a short limo (granted, the limo is probably a bit taller and with bigger seats, because Coins). I’m glad I could help you find more ways to get yourself... excited ;). I will consider it a badge of honour that we wrote a scene so hot that someone discovered more about themself and their kinks. You mention that traces of Aris’s effects on Jasper might be hidden by further hypnosis with Rhys, but have you considered that Rhys might just find more traces instead? We are still looking into both possibilities and how it would work best for what we want to do. Also, at first I was pretty surprised how much we enjoyed the precum too. It certainly gives us something novel to talk about every once in a while, and the mess can be very enticing.
Apr 2, 2022
Evan
4/14/22, 10:18 PM
I'd also like to throw in because I can't remember whether I have already or not. I have major admiration for you both for making this great a story from your roleplay. It's not easy to do and at the start I felt like I could see some of the seams. Now it is flawless. As the chapters have gone on it's become smoother and smoother and a really well-flowing story. Seamless. Other than just my observations, I'd love to give some constructive criticism but I'm afraid I can't think of any. I love the characters, the depth of the world, and the way you are writing. The best I can offer is encouragement to write more. But that also seems very self-serving.
4/15/22, 2:37 PM
@Evan Thank you so much! I think that one day I might like to go back and edit those first chapters, maybe when this is finished. There's a kind of way of answering RP where you address all the different elements and kind of echo/repeat them to let the person know what you're referring to that doesn't work as well for a story. So we actually changed the way that we write to allow for more writing between each other and editing as we go. We are definitely working on writing more -- and in no small part thanks to your encouragement (and other folks'), though of course we were planning to write more eventually. First words of Chapter 12 were written last night!
Apr 13, 2022
4/15/22, 2:35 PM
Fantastic! Definitely want to read the darker ending.