Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/13/22, 2:16 AM
brilliant concept… and v hotly written!!!
4/13/22, 1:35 AM
Very fun, very hot, very original. A really great one shot that really does the trick.
4/13/22, 1:05 AM
*Gargles cock.* “Tennis!” *Gargles cock.* Made me chuckle. Fun, hot little story!
4/12/22, 9:12 PM
A wonderful start! And my first official story to approve!

4/13/22, 12:44 AM
Eyyy, @Norismo - what an honour! I’m glad you enjoyed :blush:
Evan
4/13/22, 12:19 AM
Really creative mechanism for the mind control. And loads of fun. Quite the ending too, setting up the option of quite a wild second chapter. Great work, thank you for writing.
SJ
4/12/22, 11:39 PM
Sammy has had an interesting 4 months. That school is clearly not a safe space. To think this all started because a kid wanted a water polo teammate. Did dear Dad miss his son coming out party? Sean wanted in on the fun, I remember knocking on closed doors…. These siblings love to share food, drugs, and Sammy.
4/12/22, 10:35 PM
Sammy is the man! I wonder how many other jock friends he owns.
Evan
4/12/22, 9:46 PM
I know I say it every chapter, but I just love this series. It is hot and sensual and full of love all at once.
4/12/22, 7:50 PM
I really like the inventiveness of the mind control in this story. I almost wish we knew who or what caused the flickering billboard, but I like that it also remains a mystery. Ending this as the entire bus load of men see the sign is pretty brilliant, too, because it lets our imaginations run wild with what kind of orgy happens. Great work, as always!
4/12/22, 7:45 PM
> ‘He’s definitely straight,’ thought Ricky, watching his mate clearly unsure on how to dance sexy. This is one of the best character building sentences in a story. It establishes William as an outsider that makes his embarrassment greater and gives a stronger impact to their romantic story. Great stuff!