Recent Comments

4/13/22, 3:08 PM
Not a bad opening chapter, mate. I don't normally read fanfiction, so I won't be ruthlessly critiquing this! However, I am happy to see enough of your own creative voice in it; it doesn't seem to _just_ be 'Pokémon + fucking'. So far, this reads like something that should also be published on Cupid.
4/13/22, 1:08 PM
Impeccable pacing, hot discovery, mysterious mind-addling, and some exciting opportunities for more—nailed it again. But if that increasingly huge dick doesn’t get productive enough for cum inflation after a few chapters I’ll have some words…

4/13/22, 1:50 PM
Thanks, @Soren Fitz! Looking at the tags I plan to apply in future chapters, my eyes keep falling on ‘hyper’ and I just can’t see that *not* applying to cumshots…
Evan
4/13/22, 11:01 AM
I adored the first two stories, particularly the second chapter. This is an amazing interpretation of the aftermath of those events. I love that you have left it open for a fourth, I am curious what happened to the original Alpha and his new acquisitions. Brilliant! SO hot. Musk, insatiable horniness, converting others to enjoy it too. Beautiful.
Evan
4/13/22, 8:52 AM
Awesome end. Dad knows how to avoid pregnancies and still get your rocks off. Guys know what guys need. Loved the inclusion of Coach and Jack's control over both of them. Another great story, thanks for sharing your work with us.
Zero
4/13/22, 4:40 AM
maybe the boys of organization xiii, with kaa proving superior due to his focus on pleasure?
4/13/22, 3:45 AM
At this point, Sammy is almost a deity of sex. He can seduce anyone with his magic penis. Who is Devon to deny his new god his ass? Interestingly, Sammy still likes getting his ass eaten. Looks like he can bottom when he wants to?

4/13/22, 3:46 AM
@Larry Sammy likes all pleasure in all ways :)
4/13/22, 2:30 AM
Such a beautiful story. Surprised we didn't get to rate it for love. Thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
4/12/22, 2:24 PM
Really good story so far. Dr. Adam would make me dumber just looking at me! Is Markus going to get rubberized? Or experience chastity, to help him stay focused...

Rubber_Lover14
4/13/22, 2:29 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I can spoil anything on this story, as I honestly have no idea where it's going outside of some vague ideas, but I am working on a project that involves some rubber. Currently it's planned to be a one shot, but if enough people like it I may expand upon it. But that won't be out till later this week. Depends on my motivation. But I would like to involve some rubber at some point
Anonymous
4/13/22, 2:16 AM
brilliant concept… and v hotly written!!!
4/13/22, 1:35 AM
Very fun, very hot, very original. A really great one shot that really does the trick.