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EntrancedGay92
4/11/22, 8:14 PM
A nice change of pace using a billboard for mass hypnosis. A shame McKenzie's dad wasn't with him. :smirk:
4/11/22, 8:08 PM
It might have suffered from length. I felt the car engine and foreplay (like in Chapter 3) went back and restarted too often. However, that is of small concern when you consider the effectiveness of the series generally. I can see why 2 and 4 have the shiny badges; they seem to "happen to be" the best distillations of the fantasy, and they build to a climax naturally (although I also have a soft spot for the quicker pacing of Chapter 1). Together, all six of them make a good compilation and having read all six, a person might "re-read" them in any order, at any time and enjoy themselves and the scenario. Good stuff; I'm glad I *forced* myself to read outside of my comfort zone.
4/11/22, 8:01 PM
Whoops; I accidentally commented twice.
Iriefal
4/11/22, 6:34 PM
Woow, am I first to comment after this long time? Anyway I like the idea that spoils your other books in the epilogue. And I love main character, he has similar interests to me (into older, stronger and is dominant). But I myself am bottom even though I love domming. If you could 1 day write something with MC(main character) doing some MC(mind control) to get older stronger tops for himself I would be in heaven πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ Once again thx for amazing story
4/11/22, 4:19 PM
That was the hottest thing I have read in a long time its been a while but any ideas for a part 2 or 3 I love a trilogy.

4/11/22, 4:39 PM
@aknun No current plans, but you just never know what the future holds. In the meantime, my stories [The Work Wife Glitch](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/891670) and [Revenge of the Trolls](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10001370) show what happens when the reality enhancer is used in the workplace and on a personal computer...
4/11/22, 2:40 PM
Henry , it just keeps getting better , sex is not always needed in some stories , but it does help lol, I like where it’s going can’t wait for next chapter

4/11/22, 4:18 PM
@Bimarguy Thank you! Yes, I wanted this story to be more about the transformation and less about sex. Its enjoyable being able to write something different, keeps it interesting. :D
4/8/22, 9:55 PM
Jonathan sounds quite hot, and I'd love to find out what socks he wears and how they smell!

Rubber_Lover14
4/9/22, 12:14 AM
@James Heller That's good to know. Honestly, I forgot he was even in it XD but now that you've reminded me, he'll definitely be in the running. And who knows, maybe we'll get to see him and his smelly socks involved at some point. We'll just have to see what comes to mind when I write part 4

Rubber_Lover14
4/10/22, 5:32 PM
@James Heller Hello! Just to let you know, I've updated the post to include images of each character at the bottom. Or as close as I could find. If u wanna see their images then go right ahead. Who knows, it might change your vote

4/11/22, 11:43 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 Darrah is so hot!!

Rubber_Lover14
4/11/22, 3:21 PM
@James Heller I'm glad you like Darrah. I wanted to have a range of different body types, and darrah was my attempt at finding a more fem body/character. Who knows, maybe he's involved more in the future
4/11/22, 3:17 PM
Great ending to your story.! A new Ck is born [Charlie's Kink Factory]

4/11/22, 3:21 PM
@tankonpoint Thanks! I recommend checking out the "America's next top kinkster' series. It's a spin off of the kink factory ones you'll probably enjoy. Appreciate the comments πŸ‘ŠπŸ»
4/11/22, 2:01 PM
I want to see more! I really want Hank and Jimmy to fuck Brody!
4/11/22, 1:52 PM
@tankonpoint Tysm man! Would love to hear your thoughts on the other stories of you do get a chance to read them! I had a lot of fun getting weird and creative with this series.