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4/11/22, 7:47 PM
Such an amazing continuation of this story! I think it's even hotter than the first two chapters.

4/11/22, 10:34 PM
@Hypnothrill - Was that pun intended? Regardless, it made me smile. And receiving praise from Hypnothrill makes my cheeks redden and my cock stiffen.
4/11/22, 10:05 PM
This was hot. I hope you do another chapter involving the school bus full of college jocks & their coach.
suitedsubmissive
4/11/22, 8:53 PM
As always, your work made my cocklet bust its nut, Sir! Glad to see Wes is back writing!!
4/11/22, 8:37 PM
Oh, Jack. He is settled into a kind of routine. I hope nothing upsets that routine.
4/11/22, 7:20 PM
God I've been binge listening to the SCP podcast recently and because of how many times I've read this amazing, sexy as hell, enthralling and interesting story every single entity they discuss, whether it be world endingly terrifying or goofy as hell, has got me at least a little horny. This is one that really sticks with me, and I dearly hope gets updated again one day but if not-thank you for how goddamn good it is

4/11/22, 8:25 PM
@HypnoticPrey Oh wow, thanks! I definitely still have plans for this. The next chapter of my *Edits* story is the next thing I'm going to publish, but I have the beginnings of chapter 6 of *Spirits* doodled.
EntrancedGay92
4/11/22, 8:14 PM
A nice change of pace using a billboard for mass hypnosis. A shame McKenzie's dad wasn't with him. :smirk:
4/11/22, 8:08 PM
It might have suffered from length. I felt the car engine and foreplay (like in Chapter 3) went back and restarted too often. However, that is of small concern when you consider the effectiveness of the series generally. I can see why 2 and 4 have the shiny badges; they seem to "happen to be" the best distillations of the fantasy, and they build to a climax naturally (although I also have a soft spot for the quicker pacing of Chapter 1). Together, all six of them make a good compilation and having read all six, a person might "re-read" them in any order, at any time and enjoy themselves and the scenario. Good stuff; I'm glad I *forced* myself to read outside of my comfort zone.
4/11/22, 8:01 PM
Whoops; I accidentally commented twice.
Iriefal
4/11/22, 6:34 PM
Woow, am I first to comment after this long time? Anyway I like the idea that spoils your other books in the epilogue. And I love main character, he has similar interests to me (into older, stronger and is dominant). But I myself am bottom even though I love domming. If you could 1 day write something with MC(main character) doing some MC(mind control) to get older stronger tops for himself I would be in heaven 💪💪💪 Once again thx for amazing story
4/11/22, 4:19 PM
That was the hottest thing I have read in a long time its been a while but any ideas for a part 2 or 3 I love a trilogy.

4/11/22, 4:39 PM
@aknun No current plans, but you just never know what the future holds. In the meantime, my stories [The Work Wife Glitch](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/891670) and [Revenge of the Trolls](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10001370) show what happens when the reality enhancer is used in the workplace and on a personal computer...