Whew! This chapter was the best one yet. I can tell you had fun with it. The way you describe the scene, lots of hot details, and the interaction between Markus and Doc Adam, was excellent. I love how Markus keeps going deeper and deeper into a trap and suspects that maybe something is wrong, but it’s all just so confusing… and stimulating! The way Doc Adam is slowly and carefully training him – the musky pheromones, the itchy lube, pleasurable stretching of his hole, the cunning development of his nipples, turning them into control buttons basically, the leather bondage that Markus can’t help flexing against with his big muscles, and, of course, the throbbing and dripping, not to mention the Doc’s whispered words in his ears (that pesky sound of waves, ha ha ha)… the buff jock will soon find his own body working against him. Next time he is on the internet, he better look up “muscle slave” because that’s his destiny, whether he wants it or not (if he can still read)! Heh heh. I guess the Doctor was in the market for a big macho stud boy he could make his own. Did Markus’s coach send him to Doc Adam knowing what was going to happen? Is he in on it? Or is he clueless? As for the other guys, I’d go with Sam since he seems to have a bit of a smart-mouth rivalry with Marcus. Opportunities for Sam humiliating Markus before he himself gets put on the slippery slide to a life of lifting and service. I wonder if Darrah might be more on the side of the doctor (if he knew what was going on)? He seems the type that might relish being able to exercise control over Markus. And then there is the Coach. Maybe he will start to wonder what is going on with his star player? A little investigation might be in order. No doubt Coach, used to having his orders followed, can't imagine anyone getting the best of him. But if his curiosity about the doctor peaks while he's at the gym and he decides to have a snoop around the doctor's office late at night without bothering to change out of his sweaty gear, he may find himself more vulnerable than he thinks! Can’t wait for Part 4.

Interesting turn of events! Cannot wait for more!

Great story. Thank you

That said they did have a couple in the reboot of Stepford Wives but then again that was more turning then into robots rather then mind control. Plus if they're going for an old fashion esstetic then break up a couple and turning one into a house boy isn't a bad idea. They had a 2 bedroom house and wasn't married so easy to do. Sure he seems nice and welcomes them as a married couple and everyone feels they would have accepted them. However that could be an act to. I feel it works either way where they turn them straight and one is a house boy or if you turn them into an old fashion vintage couple.

It was not bad but things seemed to advanced rather quickly. It went they arrive get a welcome gift early evening. Freddy sprays it and suddenly changes. However Mike doesn't notice until the following day and is shocked. He also doesn't feel like he needed brainwashed as he seemed to like the old fashion style and looked the part when requested. However William acts like he's resistant when in fact he's not. It was a commission but feels it could be a little more flushed out.

I definitely like the whole Stepford vibe of the story; it did remind me of _Them_ on Amazon a bit. I agree with Entraced Gay that Fredrick's turn was a bit abrupt and Michael being made into a houseboy seems out of place with the Stepford, especially as in the Nicole Kidman version of the movie they did have a gay couple and the partner was made into a Stepford spouse.

How did I miss this story? What a fantastic idea. Please tell me that you will continue the story.

Die Story wird spannend... gut geschrieben und da kann noch so allerhand passieren.. freu mich auf weitere folgen.

Brilliantly told, each chapter hotter that the last! Casey and Paul's journey is so well done and so hot. Keep it up please!

Keeps getting better with each chapter!