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This Can't Be Happening
4/11/22, 10:59 PM
Nobody writes the transition from "I'll fuck you up, bro" to "I wanna fuck you, bro" better than you, Neemie

4/11/22, 11:45 PM
@This Can't Be Happening Aww, shucks. Not sure what it says about my aesthetic, but I'll take it.
4/11/22, 3:27 PM
God please tell me this is not the end! I literally check the site daily for the next chapters of this story.

4/11/22, 4:50 PM
@randy7869 This is most definately not the end. Part 7 is written. It is being edited. It is taking time 37k words on top of the first 6 parts this has been an epic endeavour and is just taking longer than hoped to finish off the proof reading.

4/11/22, 11:37 PM
@Speedychopslover YAY! Please keep writing. If not this story more like it. You are a great writer and I'm glued to every edition!
4/11/22, 9:50 PM
You know I love it when characters don't have names, but titles instead. Give me a story full of Officers and Fresh Meat any day of the week. Loved this!

4/11/22, 10:38 PM
@absman420 - Dammit! I wish I knew that. Now I wish I hadn't revealed Officer's name in one of the sentences. I may have to go back and edit that out just for you. I realize you're absolutely right. Having a police officer in the story ... he should remain completely mysterious. I should have known better. I say, for my obvious mistake, I make it up to you by letting you have your way with me. I can't guarantee I'll learn from my mistake, so you just may have to deliver this punishment again and again. ;)
4/11/22, 7:47 PM
Such an amazing continuation of this story! I think it's even hotter than the first two chapters.

4/11/22, 10:34 PM
@Hypnothrill - Was that pun intended? Regardless, it made me smile. And receiving praise from Hypnothrill makes my cheeks redden and my cock stiffen.
4/11/22, 10:05 PM
This was hot. I hope you do another chapter involving the school bus full of college jocks & their coach.
suitedsubmissive
4/11/22, 8:53 PM
As always, your work made my cocklet bust its nut, Sir! Glad to see Wes is back writing!!
4/11/22, 8:37 PM
Oh, Jack. He is settled into a kind of routine. I hope nothing upsets that routine.
4/11/22, 7:20 PM
God I've been binge listening to the SCP podcast recently and because of how many times I've read this amazing, sexy as hell, enthralling and interesting story every single entity they discuss, whether it be world endingly terrifying or goofy as hell, has got me at least a little horny. This is one that really sticks with me, and I dearly hope gets updated again one day but if not-thank you for how goddamn good it is

4/11/22, 8:25 PM
@HypnoticPrey Oh wow, thanks! I definitely still have plans for this. The next chapter of my *Edits* story is the next thing I'm going to publish, but I have the beginnings of chapter 6 of *Spirits* doodled.
EntrancedGay92
4/11/22, 8:14 PM
A nice change of pace using a billboard for mass hypnosis. A shame McKenzie's dad wasn't with him. :smirk:
4/11/22, 8:08 PM
It might have suffered from length. I felt the car engine and foreplay (like in Chapter 3) went back and restarted too often. However, that is of small concern when you consider the effectiveness of the series generally. I can see why 2 and 4 have the shiny badges; they seem to "happen to be" the best distillations of the fantasy, and they build to a climax naturally (although I also have a soft spot for the quicker pacing of Chapter 1). Together, all six of them make a good compilation and having read all six, a person might "re-read" them in any order, at any time and enjoy themselves and the scenario. Good stuff; I'm glad I *forced* myself to read outside of my comfort zone.