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3/22/25, 4:47 PM
Zemo? That's a rare character to see; especially in fan fiction. No doubt rescuing the hero, but just to have his own control over him. But how he does it will be very exciting to see.

3/22/25, 9:47 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I am trying to keep it MCU adjacent and am moving to Captain America soon so he felt like the best pivot I could use.
3/22/25, 8:14 PM
I'm alive. It's been a while since I posted this story and for a long time I didn't know exactly how to continue it, but I managed to come up with something I liked, and I hope you like it too. Let's hope this chapter doesn't have such a glaring error as the last one (8” wide) hahaha. But to be honest, I haven't corrected and edited this chapter that thoroughly, so if you notice any mistakes, feel free to comment and I'll correct them at some point. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it. And I should probably write at least one more chapter for this story to finish it off the way I envisioned, so stay tuned. I'll try not to take months to post this time hahaha.
Satyroom
3/21/25, 11:21 PM
Love your writing! I'm looking for a writer for some of my game. Paid job. You can DM me at https://x.com/satyroom or on bluesky at @satyroom.bsky.social Interesting to see more of your work in general :^)

3/22/25, 5:09 PM
@Satyroom Thank you! I just DM’d you on X/Twitter/whatever.
Rob
3/22/25, 3:30 PM
So hot !!! Loved how it took revenge against onlyfans people who scam others and this was by far one of the more unique angles to depict hot sexy foot worship in such a naughty way 😈 I have friends who find hypnosis to be very sexy too and I love how you weave it into the narrative here. You write excellently and paint a vivid picture with all your details. 5 out of 5!! Would love to see a porn of this
3/22/25, 12:59 PM
I'm always up for a good stink story. It's rare that one centers on it like this one does. Writing is direct and crisp. I would have liked if there was more description of the increasing odors, other than just mentioning them. For example . . . HOW one guys musk differs from another. Kind of lost the scent in part two.
3/22/25, 12:40 PM
WOW! The way that you describe things is so exciting... erotic. THANKYOU. That was FUN.
3/22/25, 12:01 PM
And now Helmut Zemo to the rescue or for further abuse? Either way, you make it a great story. Thank you, Jack.
3/22/25, 11:55 AM
Been a while since I've read such a well built story. Thanks for writing and I hope you can keep going
3/22/25, 10:55 AM
Damn harry is
3/22/25, 6:11 AM
Wow. I just read this story from beginning to end. I cannot believe I missed this story. Easily the best I have read by far over the last decade. I think your profile picture also reminds me of Ethan at least how you describe his appearance in the beginning. Id love to see your singlet inspiration and a continuation if possible. One aspect that I think could be developed if this was continued is more about how Ryan came to be or even their relationship. Is Ethan really just a tool for Ryan or through their training and experiences living together did he develop feelings / relationship with him as a husband or boyfriend. It would be good to develop this more. I think even a spinoff would be good if you just want to make a new story. Maybe even a prequel story to how coach got Ryan in the first place. You describe him as Asian compared to the blond Ethan and I think that makes for a great storyline. I love the wrestling singlet fetish and I think pictures describe a thousand words and would love links to your descriptions. Overall just excellent. I did not want this story to end and will definitely come back to read it again!